ThePharaonicDoc
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Honestly, I'm very annoyed by the info and flashbacks in the middle of the fight, i mean he could think all those while escaping not in the middle of the fight then get surprised by stuff happening x.x
كل سنه و انت طيب يسط xD
Don't stop writing this novel please, Your writing style is good even tho it's not an original but as ur first story i give you 5/5 thumps up man just for the original power up theme
A very interesting concept tbh , but it's weird talking about the past and the present like we already know about his past and it was never mentioned her recarniated or something in the very beginning. + GOD DAMN HE TALKS TO HIMSELF MUCH , SO MUCH INNER MONOLOUGE sheesh. so far i read up to chapter 22 and the way things are going he's like one rank behind the stongest beings ? just without a back up lol
Is it a good novel tho ? i have it on book marks but the comments were not positive
She's in the cover , so nope impossible unless he just wanna ruin his story xD
#Egyptian_Supremasy lol
I feel very conflicted , the idea , the story , the quality ARE TOP NOTCH but there are too much information dump with a some how slow progress. Yes the information was important but it can be simplified and explained on multiple times not a here you go all the info about this topic xD feel me ? aside from that and some stuff could have been slightly altered to make a better flow , i'll wait for more chapters patiently, please keep it up. ( out of review : i really don't like the writing about the side characters tbh to take entire 4 damn chapters but it's kinda new and i really can't say it's a negative thing , i just wants more progress for the main character xD )
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