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    3737_irinol4d ago
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    Author, please add the world of Harry Potter. The main character is supposed to be a very powerful wizard. I hope he'll be as powerful as the original heroine who played this role. The most interesting thing about magic is that it's a fairy tale. Fairy tale magic is very powerful, from curses to blessings, etc. Anyway, I watched that movie a long time ago, but I hope the author won't let me down. If it's magic, then the world of Magic is needed, etc. It would be very interesting. )))

  • 3737_irinol
    3737_irinola month ago
    Posted

    This is a translation, right???? Can you please tell me the original title of the story???? This is a translation, right???? Can you please tell me the original title of the story????

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  • 3737_irinol
    3737_irinola month ago
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    1. Shisui couldn't create the Mangyoko-Sharingan illusion technique; it awakened. Secondly, he didn't just say this out of nowhere; he wanted to stop the Uchiha clan. There was even a separate episode where they showed Shisui and how it happened... The Chinese idiot who wrote this apparently didn't watch anime... It's complete nonsense.

  • 3737_irinol
    3737_irinola month ago
    Posted

    I haven't read the story or anything, but I'll say one thing. If I were writing a serious story, especially about the Hidden Sand, the Land of Sand, and they talk about GGG's crystal abilities, what do you guys think would be a better gift for the main character? A wood element like the First Hokage, where he can make the soil fertile. Or a crystal element? Where's the logic? I only read the description, etc. I just decided to ask before reading, maybe people could tell me. ?????????

  • 3737_irinol
    3737_irinol2 months ago
    Posted

    The first and most disgusting thing about this story is the main character, a stupid, brainless idiot... He was ignored by the Uchiha clan for so many years, and then he came running to them as soon as they called him...!! The second is, why didn't he drop his Uchiha name?? To a regular one?? If everyone forgot about him, etc.... Complete nonsense, a normal person wouldn't do that, although there's only one Chinese one. I think this is a Chinese fanfic... The main character, um, how should I say, is a slave to the system, etc.... Why make a slave system? Ugh, disgusting, it ruins the story. The idea is interesting, but I think they ruined it. He's stupid, etc. He could have just refused calmly, he was essentially an ordinary civilian, etc. In short, there's a lot of stupidity, these chapters are really stupid...

  • 3737_irinol
    3737_irinol3 months ago
    Posted

    An interesting story. What am I expecting? I hope the main character finds a way to not age, or to get to the future after the battle against the goblins, etc. Have you read the fanfic called "". In LOTR with the Harry Potter system "'' Here, GGG created the Philosopher's Stone, but changed the method of creation, thereby stopping it from aging, etc. I hope the author finds a way... Ancient magic will also exist, and GGG will awaken it? I wonder how exactly?? The author here, maybe he'll make a cool plot. I'm looking forward to it. GGG, will he find a way or ritual to improve the potential of magic and strength, etc.? After all, you can become stronger not only through regular training, I hope the author will add something interesting from this, rituals, etc.... Animagus, combat alchemy. I really hope combat alchemy appears, after all, the title of your story, and construction alchemy is building a castle, etc. With alchemy, that's an entire plot arc that can only be done through construction... Damn, there was an interesting Chinese fanfic, but as you know, all the Chinese love to spoil the essence of magic with their stupid food, etc.... They ruin everything. In short, I hope you keep the British accent, because this is Britain. If it's in France, then... French accent and so on... and not like the Chinese who ruin everything, I'm waiting....

  • 3737_irinol
    3737_irinol4 months ago
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    Author, you understand that some spells hadn't been invented yet at that time. Magic was different back then, it's called ancient or whatever. So, during the founders' time, there weren't many different spells, but they had many others. I hope the author doesn't add modern magic. He should take into account when a particular spell will appear, since they were created over thousands of years, etc. So, I hope you understand. I'm waiting for new chapters.

  • 3737_irinol
    3737_irinol4 months ago
    Posted

    I hope the author will tell the story of Merlin, it will be a big arc of about 400 chapters. The story of King Arthur and also Morgana, etc. I don’t remember exactly, and then it will be interesting to see the continuation of the new arc, when Merlin appears during the time of Harry Potter. I hope the author will not disappoint us, because in the world of Harry Potter, Merlin was the greatest wizard, even the founders could not compete with him in magic. It would be interesting if Merlin appeared on the flying Ostrava with a castle, a large library, etc. Maybe when the unicorn dies from Voldy in the first film??? Depending on what the author decides. The only downside is the lack of chapters))) I hope the author dives into the depths of magic, especially battles, etc. Alchemy, by the way, I read a fanfic where GGG is a Chinese alchemist, but damn, he seemed to use Minecraft there??? Remember? That kind of thing. There's also another one where the battles are awesome and the magic is explored in an interesting way. Enchanting Melodies (HP SI) I hope the author gets inspired or writes another fanfic. Hogwarts: Proficiency Panel. They explore magic in an interesting way here. So, I hope you'll uncover the magic and so on... Your story is awesome, I give it 5 stars, I'm waiting for new chapters :)

  • 3737_irinol
    3737_irinol4 months ago
    Posted

    The fanfic idea is really cool and interesting. There's a similar fanfic, only it's Chinese, but it's great, but as always, the author ruined everything with jokes, and the jokes are stupid. It would be better if they made it like the Chinese fanfic. The registration system in the Harry Potter world, the Lord of the Rings system?! That would be cool. I hope you make a fanfic like this without the stupid jokes and where the slave system is... I'm waiting...

  • 3737_irinol
    3737_irinol5 months ago
    Posted

    Very interesting, very interesting! I'm waiting for more chapters! Is this a translation? Is there an original version? Is the original in an Indian language? Please tell me the title, or if you are the author, I eagerly await new chapters!