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I'll say this: GGG's reaction shouldn't have been like that... he would have been irritated, he would have gotten angry. Personally, I think the author ruined everything in the last two chapters... I'm disappointed. He hid everything for so long... you know, those smiles of that old woman, how fake they look, very fake, because of this, it felt somehow unpleasant when you were discovered and told the Hokage. I think GGG should be angry, but the author either didn't feel it 🤔 or I don't even know what to say... and. The most important thing is the secrets of techniques, etc. It's a secret and no one other than the Hokage will judge because it's a secret... Every shinobi has this... You forgot that shinobi information has always played one of the main reasons for battles in the Naruto world... These were secrets and it didn't matter if they were comrades from the same village, etc. The Hokage would never ask such stupid questions... Why didn't he tell me, why didn't he show me, nonsense 👎 Complete nonsense... Why did they decide for him whether he would be in the clan or not? I would have refused on principle... It somehow felt disgusting in my soul. .... Something like that, eww...🤢

I'm forced to abandon this story just because of this chapter. The last chapter "I want to unite the world, etc.... ruined everything... everything in this chapter is the end, and everything was fine, the beginning was interesting, but the author ruined it with this chapter. I hope you fix it and the main character changes to grow as a sane, kind, normal person. I'm waiting...

An interesting story, the main character's abilities are also interesting, and most importantly, he has a normal protagonist, not some psycho who wants to unite the world, etc., or where the main character always calls people evil, etc. He himself is worse than trash as a person... Here you feel like the main character is, let's say, a normal guy. This is exactly what many fanfics lack: a mentally normal person. I'll say it again: normal is a masterpiece. That's the only reason... Another plus for the main character of this story is his talent, this great balance. I like it.

Author, please add the world of Harry Potter. The main character is supposed to be a very powerful wizard. I hope he'll be as powerful as the original heroine who played this role. The most interesting thing about magic is that it's a fairy tale. Fairy tale magic is very powerful, from curses to blessings, etc. Anyway, I watched that movie a long time ago, but I hope the author won't let me down. If it's magic, then the world of Magic is needed, etc. It would be very interesting. )))

This is a translation, right???? Can you please tell me the original title of the story???? This is a translation, right???? Can you please tell me the original title of the story????

1. Shisui couldn't create the Mangyoko-Sharingan illusion technique; it awakened. Secondly, he didn't just say this out of nowhere; he wanted to stop the Uchiha clan. There was even a separate episode where they showed Shisui and how it happened... The Chinese idiot who wrote this apparently didn't watch anime... It's complete nonsense.

I haven't read the story or anything, but I'll say one thing. If I were writing a serious story, especially about the Hidden Sand, the Land of Sand, and they talk about GGG's crystal abilities, what do you guys think would be a better gift for the main character? A wood element like the First Hokage, where he can make the soil fertile. Or a crystal element? Where's the logic? I only read the description, etc. I just decided to ask before reading, maybe people could tell me. ?????????

The first and most disgusting thing about this story is the main character, a stupid, brainless idiot... He was ignored by the Uchiha clan for so many years, and then he came running to them as soon as they called him...!! The second is, why didn't he drop his Uchiha name?? To a regular one?? If everyone forgot about him, etc.... Complete nonsense, a normal person wouldn't do that, although there's only one Chinese one. I think this is a Chinese fanfic... The main character, um, how should I say, is a slave to the system, etc.... Why make a slave system? Ugh, disgusting, it ruins the story. The idea is interesting, but I think they ruined it. He's stupid, etc. He could have just refused calmly, he was essentially an ordinary civilian, etc. In short, there's a lot of stupidity, these chapters are really stupid...

An interesting story. What am I expecting? I hope the main character finds a way to not age, or to get to the future after the battle against the goblins, etc. Have you read the fanfic called "". In LOTR with the Harry Potter system "'' Here, GGG created the Philosopher's Stone, but changed the method of creation, thereby stopping it from aging, etc. I hope the author finds a way... Ancient magic will also exist, and GGG will awaken it? I wonder how exactly?? The author here, maybe he'll make a cool plot. I'm looking forward to it. GGG, will he find a way or ritual to improve the potential of magic and strength, etc.? After all, you can become stronger not only through regular training, I hope the author will add something interesting from this, rituals, etc.... Animagus, combat alchemy. I really hope combat alchemy appears, after all, the title of your story, and construction alchemy is building a castle, etc. With alchemy, that's an entire plot arc that can only be done through construction... Damn, there was an interesting Chinese fanfic, but as you know, all the Chinese love to spoil the essence of magic with their stupid food, etc.... They ruin everything. In short, I hope you keep the British accent, because this is Britain. If it's in France, then... French accent and so on... and not like the Chinese who ruin everything, I'm waiting....

Author, you understand that some spells hadn't been invented yet at that time. Magic was different back then, it's called ancient or whatever. So, during the founders' time, there weren't many different spells, but they had many others. I hope the author doesn't add modern magic. He should take into account when a particular spell will appear, since they were created over thousands of years, etc. So, I hope you understand. I'm waiting for new chapters.