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It's a great story, but the dialogue is terrible. It's like poetry, or verse, or short stories. 😅 I hope the author fixes this and improves it. I hope he sees this comment and improves the quality of his work. I'm waiting for new chapters.

This is exactly the fanfic I was looking for: construction, alchemy, the sound of ancient magic, etc. In other fanfics, everyone repeats the same thing, but yours is something new and cool, I like it 😊 I'm waiting for new chapters, it's great.

I'm waiting for new chapters. The fanfic is great, one of my favorites. I'm waiting, waiting, waiting, and once again, I'm waiting for new chapters. I hope the author continues the story.

Can anyone tell me if the main character is a boy or a girl????? Please tell me Can anyone tell me if the main character is a boy or a girl????? Please tell me

Wow, this is awesome, what can I say? The main character seems like a normal guy and not crazy. I've read chapter 75 so far. I hope I've read at least one fanfic where the main character isn't like all the other Uchiha, or other idiot time travelers who, when they became Uchiha, became crazy. But this story is interesting. The Third Hokage is more realistic than in other fanfics, which is one of the big pluses. Secondly, there's realism, rules, shinobi, etc., too. Of course, there's a small problem with GGG's character: his emotionless face doesn't spoil the plot much. The story is interesting, the dialogues are interestingly constructed. I hope the author will work on improving the dialogue, the realism of the depth of the world, the rules of the village, and the village itself, ordinary people, the abilities, and strength of GGG. His read is interesting. I'm waiting for more chapters. I hope GGG grows as a person. It's just that in other fanfics, GGG doesn't change at all as a person or becomes crazy. The main thing is that he doesn't become an evil psychopath, but is a normal person.

I'll say this: GGG's reaction shouldn't have been like that... he would have been irritated, he would have gotten angry. Personally, I think the author ruined everything in the last two chapters... I'm disappointed. He hid everything for so long... you know, those smiles of that old woman, how fake they look, very fake, because of this, it felt somehow unpleasant when you were discovered and told the Hokage. I think GGG should be angry, but the author either didn't feel it 🤔 or I don't even know what to say... and. The most important thing is the secrets of techniques, etc. It's a secret and no one other than the Hokage will judge because it's a secret... Every shinobi has this... You forgot that shinobi information has always played one of the main reasons for battles in the Naruto world... These were secrets and it didn't matter if they were comrades from the same village, etc. The Hokage would never ask such stupid questions... Why didn't he tell me, why didn't he show me, nonsense 👎 Complete nonsense... Why did they decide for him whether he would be in the clan or not? I would have refused on principle... It somehow felt disgusting in my soul. .... Something like that, eww...🤢

I'm forced to abandon this story just because of this chapter. The last chapter "I want to unite the world, etc.... ruined everything... everything in this chapter is the end, and everything was fine, the beginning was interesting, but the author ruined it with this chapter. I hope you fix it and the main character changes to grow as a sane, kind, normal person. I'm waiting...

An interesting story, the main character's abilities are also interesting, and most importantly, he has a normal protagonist, not some psycho who wants to unite the world, etc., or where the main character always calls people evil, etc. He himself is worse than trash as a person... Here you feel like the main character is, let's say, a normal guy. This is exactly what many fanfics lack: a mentally normal person. I'll say it again: normal is a masterpiece. That's the only reason... Another plus for the main character of this story is his talent, this great balance. I like it.

Author, please add the world of Harry Potter. The main character is supposed to be a very powerful wizard. I hope he'll be as powerful as the original heroine who played this role. The most interesting thing about magic is that it's a fairy tale. Fairy tale magic is very powerful, from curses to blessings, etc. Anyway, I watched that movie a long time ago, but I hope the author won't let me down. If it's magic, then the world of Magic is needed, etc. It would be very interesting. )))

This is a translation, right???? Can you please tell me the original title of the story???? This is a translation, right???? Can you please tell me the original title of the story????