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John_McClelland1yrCommentedSo... stop allowing air in... and use it as a scuba tank...
Against his wishes, Nikolai couldn't breathe in the dark dimension if he was underwater. So he held his breath and looked around, hoping that the powerful currents generated by the monster or the stream wouldn't send him away.- John_McClelland1yrCommented
He couldn't eat Sergio's food though...
After consuming a lot of his mana, Nikolai found that his appetite returned. Of course, there is also the possibility that he lost his appetite because of leaving Sergio, but he didn't know. He was just glad that there was still a human part of him. - John_McClelland1yrCommented
Oh so now he wants them to be team players...
"And why is he not with you? You're a team." Mr. Heartwrath had a terrifying frown. - John_McClelland1yrCommented
So silver is higher than gold here I see...
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Slightly? W/ a bang? Seriously?
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Left* arm?
'No, it's too dangerous. I don't want to kill anyone accidentally. You can also perish by touch, you know?' Mike saw his right hand covered in black tattoos. - John_McClelland2yrReplied to Havency_Taylor
No An increase dictates a quantitative factor. Raising dictates a qualitative factor. So it increases (ups the amount) and raises (ups the strength).
This was a Breathing Technique unique to this world. It could increase Spiritual Qi, raise Spiritual Qi, and strengthen the body. - John_McClelland2yrCommented
Phoenix?
The Fire Peacock - John_McClelland2yrCommented
.... shouldn't this be a 'fire-breath'?
Skills: Self-Destruct, Intermediate Healing Spell, Fireball - John_McClelland2yrReplied to Aiden_Haust
I'm fairly certain it was more in regards of usefulness rather than uselessness that the turtle was spared.
It seemed that it had just brushed past death. - John_McClelland2yrCommented
apparently author altered it to eye awareness...
[ Talent ] : Eye Awareness (bronze) , Ear Awareness (bronze) - John_McClelland2yrCommented
XinXia is no longer freezing...
Upon releasing the Fiery Fist, the shelves on both sides of the aisle burned down to ash under its power. This two Giant-eyed Ape Rats could only regret that they were already halfway in their charging towards him. - John_McClelland2yrCommented
In previous chapters the commanders have stated that their people needed to "keep their Paths active and ready" (I know this isn't exactly right but it's close enough)... so as long as they are still connected and he hasn't released them after the book pushed his alignment. He should arguably be able to use the spell until he does.
Below his foot, a drawing of Fire element energy was glowing brightly! - John_McClelland2yrPosted
I love this book. I would love to give it a full five stars but under the circumstances, I cannot. The writing is indeed well done, however there are some very obvious errors. I also came across the misuse of a word. The first comment I have actually added to this book (I think?) was due to this. This book drew me in so far that I didn't have any need for commenting. I tip my hat to the writer. Much praise, my friend, much praise. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
- John_McClelland2yrCommented
Wrong word... Centripetal implies an inward pull of force. Whereas this is clearly an output of the energy using inertia of the body. Which is Centrifugal.
This pusher powerless king to use his serious moves. He had managed to connect many moves in what he would call a game ending combi. Something that some video gamer players would use as a cheat. The kicks and spinning punches trailed together similar to how Asher constantly used his on centripetal force to keep up a combo of attack. - John_McClelland2yrCommented
wow... I guess translator realized his mistake.
Through the flames, Mo Fan could faintly see the Colossal-Eyed Rat get swallowed up in crimson. Its fat bulk was thrown five, six meters away, slamming head-first into the canteen walls. - John_McClelland2yrCommented
That's racist!!! 😂😂😂
“You’re so black that I can barely recognize you.” - John_McClelland2yrCommented
Y'all really need to pay attention... Water Field is the spell... Decay is the inclination
“Water Field, Decay! - John_McClelland2yrReplied to Mpod
.... Oh how naive you are...
A hairy blue foot suddenly came out of the dark. Its claws were as sharp as a knife as they sank into the stony ground... - John_McClelland2yrReplied to Raider325
His line of thinking... "He had seen the nature of humans"... He has been converted to elvenism.
This would be the memento of his first kill in this world. He was sure that there were a lot more to come, but he wasn't afraid to tread that path. He had seen the nature of humans and how he would end up if he was merciful.