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This romance originally appeared to be just a sex novel, but after some chapters became something completely amazing, I simply love this novel with all my strength, no doubt a novel class SSSSSSSSSSSSS ++++++. No character presented in the novel has mental problems, none, absolutely none. The story is stunning, the author knows how to please both sides: those who are for sex and those through the story, it is like adding to join everything in a glass and creating the most perfect drink. Honestly, after years reading novels, this novel can be in the top 5 of all the novels I've read, is simply incredible, fucking, that's very good.
The story of this novel is amazing, I love to read this romance, simply amazing, yet for God's sake, the author does not know how to show emotions in the characters, it is bizarre. I can't see emotions in dramatic moments, example: imagine you find someone again after years, a loved one, should have emotion at the moment, but the author does not know how to express emotions, this is very bad. Ends up breaking the expectations of the next chapters, because we know it will not be exciting, only conversations between robots without emotion. Author, your romance is wonderful, I love it, it's great to read this, but please learn to put emotions on the characters, I beg you, if you do that the novel will be perfect. You can learn from Against the Gods, the author knows how to express so many emotions that make you cry at dramatic moments. I hope you get better.