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roamingsaber1yrPostedI have got to say, this is a pristine work of art. The flow of the story, the intricacy of the background, the emotions of the characters and most important of all, the fricking plot, it's like a drug, you just get addicted to it, especially in the second volume. The first volume was surely lackluster and did not get me attached, but the second volume is the best work I've read on webnovel. The first volume does it's best to establish the world's background and to solidify the mc's relationships but the second volume, OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. It has everything you could want I just felt like kissing the story, how does one write so good. This novel is godly. My only complaints were that the power system does not seem too solidified, there are a few loopholes regarding it to further enhance the impact of the scene, but still I hope the author's sees to this and tries to something about it. Another thing is that sometimes the characters act out of sync, they do not act according to their established personalities and again, this is done to enrich the scene. But if this continues the novel is going to feel different and the originality which made it so unique would be missing. I sincerely hope the author looks at all this and gives us the best story on this platform. All the best guiltythree
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Beware of the Parent wolf
Since their HP wasn't that high, Isaac decided to give it a shot. - roamingsaber1yrCommented
A strict father asking about what class his son is going to choose in the game, this sounds like a dream
Maxwell then spoke up, ''Isaac, have you decided on your class in the game yet?'' - roamingsaber2yrCommented
why always old men
As the clouds they were riding on descended from the sky. A magnificent temple appeared before their eyes. An old man, with long white hair, and beard, stood in front of the entrance and looked at them with a smile on his face. - roamingsaber2yrCommented
I think it's "once a vessel get's destroyed"
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I think it's make instead of made in the last line
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it's a fricking cake
"Following this, crack in three egg yolks. Please be careful: we don't want the egg whites in the bowl, just the yolks. Now then… Mister Maester, in order to complete this miraculous delicacy as soon as possible, do you mind helping me crack in three egg yolks?" Su Ye looked at Maester, his expression earnest. He was treating the reputable lead chef of the Dolphin River Restaurant as his assistant. - roamingsaber2yrCommented
IS it icecream
Su Ye said with determination, "My recipe would introduce another dish onto the dinner tables of every household in Greece, or even throughout the world." - roamingsaber2yrCommentedCh 629 Hiders hunting down Hiders
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This is like beginning after the end novel
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why do all mothers have healing magic
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after mc become a magus he will help them rise to the top
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this is so cliche
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