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I also recommend reading a fanfic here on webnovel with a similar premise. I didn't read it because it's short and because it's written as fragments of first-person letters, but it has good reviews and can inspire you about the dynamic the captain would have finding himself in Westeros. You can also take the good things from the story and adapt them to your own, making what you had in mind even better. It's called "Captain America Thaws out in Westeros," and it's finished.

A pleasant and surprising work, a complete surprise. It's well-written, entertaining, and has no logical leaps that make you roll your eyes. A triumph, 5/5 for me.

The concept is good, but you obviously use AI to edit your chapters. The downside to this is that when the chapters tend to be very long, the apps shorten them using different methods that, a priori, aren't bad, but they obviously take away from the depth of your story, things like: (He moved fast. Faster than ever. Because if not, he would die.) This is an example, but I think you get the idea. My recommendation: divide the text into several parts so the AI ​​doesn't shorten the text. Also, use long sentences instead of short ones divided into several lines, mainly because in a narrative it's rarely seen that way, and it takes away from the immersion. Otherwise, it's a good concept.

I didn't want to wait and I translated this myself up to chapter 300, honestly, I remembered it better, but when you can read it all in one go you realize that the only reason his trick is being a warlock is so he can always win fights in a more reasonable way, other than that, he almost never uses his powers, he even turns knights under his command into warlocks and it's literally as if nothing changes, he has access to posicones, alchemical bombs, etc. But he never uses any of that in combat, the author seems to have a fetish for chivalry because it's the only thing he uses in all of combat, he has a dragon and doesn't use it while it grows up, which is reasonable, but the moment he can ride it he goes to Daenerys and she obviously sets up a marriage with him pretty much from the start, giving him power over negotiations and generally total control over her cause, despite the fact that he's a Manderly (major noble House, but honestly a pretty ordinary one with nothing remarkable about it), and really all of this could be overlooked if it weren't a huge waste to literally have the power of signs and only use them 3 or 4 times in 300 chapters. I want to make it clear that this criticism is for the work itself, the translator did an excellent job with this and made the narrative more enjoyable, in short, Story: 3.4/10, Translation: 10/10

Not bad, a breath of fresh air among so many fanfics with such similar plots. This strays a lot from the canon, but has interesting proposals.

It's the first GOT fanfic I've read with a twist even remotely similar and not only that, it's strategically coherent, with Joffrey dead, there was no reason for the kingdom to go to war with the Lannisters, perhaps Viserys could hold a grudge against them but the houses wouldn't easily follow him to a war against the Lion unless he promises marriage or lands, instead now, the dominion will go to war with the Lannisters and Vyseris has a cause to continue the conflict with the Lannisters.

Hombre de cultura.

Well, I've caught up, the translator does an excellent job, the plot is good, it presents an experienced Harry who makes good use of the philosophy of the Wolf School, preparing extensively before any event, also, the plot seems to follow the original, but in the tournament it deviates noticeably, which is a huge novelty in a Harry Potter fanfic, just for that it's worth it. Two chapters every day, excellent work and honestly, the best translation I found, it gives a lot of personality to the story. 10/10

3 chapters in a row? It's my birthday

Hermione, here they are quite close, the relationship develops quite organically.