A more than decent rewrite if we compare it to your previous fic, plus it makes a lot more sense, it's better written and the character has real depth, he has a lot of potential. (Unfortunately, if I have learned anything on this site it is that the best fanfics are abandoned and left incomplete, I hope this is different but I don't have much hope)

I was forced to leave this review because the novel offended me. It is without a doubt the biggest waste of potential I have ever had the misfortune to see, the system itself was wonderful, the skills were also very interesting and at first when he said he would only be interested in 1 girl I was ecstatic, Whether I chose Mirko or the invisible girl (whose name I don't remember) they were great and valid choices that would surely have very good sexual dynamics to read (focusing on the sexual plot of the story) Everything was going well until the author took a Deux-exmachina of the ass to get a Harem and instead of a story about getting stronger with training, battles or knowledge it became a garbage where the more you fuck the stronger you get without any type of logic, at first his system abilities worked like Quirks, but then they were literally things that completely altered the established rules themselves. And why do I say that it offends me? Because the story was wonderful until it decided to focus solely on sex, now there are entire chapters dedicated to sex over and over again, to the point that the plot of the apparent apocalypse completely doesn't matter, it is unpleasant as it goes from having a lot of potential to being another novel cheap porn, I hope the author can return to a real plot at some point because he has a lot of talent in writing.

Short but well written fanfic, being so short you can't expect much more development than what has been done, but I think the narrative was good, Also, with the MC being a "strong and manly" character, I really appreciate that the fanfic hasn't degenerated into sex scenes over and over again until you no longer like them, For that reason alone it is already a very good fanfic, it stuck to an interesting and action narrative and stayed with it, I also like what it did with Momo, she could really be OP but in the manga They simply portrayed her as an object and never explored her capabilities, that she brought martial arts strong enough to compete with Quirks from her anime memories didn't really add up to me, but I think he just thought "if it works in one punch man, here too" since the universe is not very different, if I have to say something bad about the fanfic it is that I don't kill Bakugo just kidding.. hahahaha (not kidding, someone put that bitch to sleep.) In short, a short but very well done fanfic, the love is evident and it is very pleasant to read, recommended 9/10

Primero diré que tienes mi respeto por escribir algo tan largo siendo un fanfic, como alguien que escribe, se lo difícil que es, en serio que tienes mi sinceras felicitaciones. Además, la escritura es buena, las escenas y la estructura es muy limpia, bastante profesional , solo por eso te daría 3 estrellas. Ahora, vamos al grano, este fanfic es básicamente una fantasía de harem de Naruto convenientemente colocada para que el MC pueda follarse a absolutamente cualquier mujer medianamente atractiva que haya salido en el anime (Menos Sakura porque como cualquier persona cuerda, piensa que es molesta) Esto no es un problema en si mismo sino fuera que para lograrlo, hace que cualquier personaje masculino aparte de los amigos de Naruto sea escoria, asesinos psicopatas, violªdores entre muchas otras cosas desagradables, todo convenientemente colocado para que la mujer que les acompañaba en la historia original caia rendida al MC (incluida Kushina, que básicamente es su madre, pero que sin ninguna explicación aparentemente gracias a una transformación del MC ya nl estan emparentados genéticamente), todo es tan absurdamente conveniente que es desagradable, eso sin mencionar que convertir a personajes como Minato Y Asuma en cabrones me parece hasta un poquigo irrespetuoso (Minato quizás no tanto pero el sacrificio de Asuma ante hidan para protejer a sus estudiantes es uno de las escenas mas trites del anime original). Aún con todo esto, es un fanfic bien escrito, largo y que tiene buenos momentos, si eres capaz de apagar tu cerebro y disfrutar de las escenas sexuales sin que la lógica te lo impida, esto seguramente te gustará. Igualmente, sigo dándole mis respetos al autor, hacer algo así tiene merito en si mismo y se que seguramente está obra no está hecha para ser revisada desde la lógica, ya que es un fanfic de cumplimiento de deseos.

Two years have passed, I hope I get back to writing this, the concept is quite interesting.

Actually my complaint is that there was more than enough material to choose from in the world of skyrim to develop the character in terms of power level, but instead I ignore all of that and chose something as illogical in skyrim as Chinese cultivation. , it's like you make a protagonist from a chinese cultivation world learn magic from harry potter, totally inconsistent with the world and the plot

WTF?

That you add Chinese cultivation to something like the skyrim saga seems to me an insult in itself, it is sacrilege against the best European fantasy saga on the planet, it is the model in which the rest of the games and stories were developed for years.

Continuing with my search for fanfics, I also found that this is the only one that addresses the problems of the force as a concept, the light side literally encourages you to erase from your life everything that It could make you happy, keeping you in a kind of perpetual state of emotional neutrality, you're not happy, but you're not sad either, and then there's the dark side, which basically makes you a Violently deranged, this novel introduced the concept of real balance for the first time, which I really liked, in short, this novel is undoubtedly an 8 out of 10 and that is because of the harem, if not If I did, it would be a 10/10 for me.

After reading this, I looked for some more fanfics and it seems, there is nothing else remotely so well written or so long, that, in my opinion, gives it some extra points, although the harem subtracts others, even so, the result continues being positive

I'm going to be honest here, if you're a casual fan of star wars, you'll like it, why? Because even though it sometimes has a pretty big data dump, it's data that if you appreciate this universe It is quite interesting, my main complaint would be the harem, I saw it, to tell the truth unnecessary, although I could enjoy the dynamics of the relationship between those characters, I would have liked it more than Luke He'll just stick with Padme, the woman who literally destroyed the universe in his name, but if you can stomach that, it's solid fanfic and quite entertaining.

Not only that, lith defeated the traitor and helped defeat a divine beast, also the weapon he lent to Friya is now forbidden magic, Pelan is only going to shoot himself in the foot.

Actually, I think he could, but that would be the same as owing the wizard association a favor and I doubt Lith has an amulet with the association rune on it, so he wouldn't be able to contact them easily.

You know it would be great, that after Lith kills Trud in this arc, he rescues her son and either adopts him or makes him his disciple. It would be great, I look forward to this whole arc.

Over power, too powerful, most fantasy novels, you know, make the protagonist super strong with hardly any justification