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Zane_Haloski11dReplied to Pedro_SousaHis stupidity was based off of a dense mc. Dense mc aren’t that dumb. It’s funny writing a stupid character. I would recommend.
When I got to the brothel that advertises itself as both restaurant and a place of intimacy. I stopped for a few seconds to cool my head off. I need to think about Fu Xien. Don't let Rita get to you. You are trying to become stronger to support the women you like. Don't let their feelings get in the way!- Zane_Haloski1mthCommented
Don’t get caught up in lies!
According to the mod author, this mod 'completely overhauls the game and makes it even more realistic and better in every way'? - Zane_Haloski1mthCommented
Someone needs to play Tarkov to truly understand “unforgiving”
There's a lot of opportunities but it's also quite an unforgiving place if you ask me. - Zane_Haloski1mthCommentedOf course that also led to some societal problems where people end up wanting to live in these VR Capsules in a simulated world rather than the real world but that's none of my business.
- Zane_Haloski1mthReplied to Apostolus
Me having to re read it multiple times because it was written roughly. (No disrespect)
Upon arriving in front of Lord Manfred's office, Vaan pushed open the doors after knocking and receiving the person's permission to enter. - Zane_Haloski3mthReplied to PrimasCh 155 Chapter 10: A Massive Upgrade
- Zane_Haloski3mthReplied to Primas
Thank you for the review. This is my first somewhat successful story. It is much easier to write a dumb character. I could make him smart but I think it is funny if a character is dumb and selfish. It makes people mad which some characters are not written to be like. Think of Subaru from Re:Zero. Thank you so much for your review.
- Zane_Haloski4mthCommentedSomething was clearly broken in her brain and somehow she thought I was cute and cuddly when I was in dragon form.
- Zane_Haloski4mthCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1: I Don’t Remember Much
- Zane_Haloski6mthCommentedRyan had not yet been accepted into the dormitories at the academy, so he had to take a short bus ride every day to a nearby apartment.
- Zane_Haloski6mthReplied to Supreme_V
noble sounds to formal in my opinion. don't know a better name though.
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Are these world destroying great weapons?
This paragraph has been deleted. - Zane_Haloski6mthCommentedThey were too real to be a dream.
- Zane_Haloski6mthCommentedNo! I don't want to die . I'm still a virgin goddamit !
- Zane_Haloski6mthCommented
You see us men Do things because of curves
My only uncle was coming back? Normally, I should have felt some flicker of happiness at the idea of seeing my only family member, but instead, all I could summon was a deep, simmering hatred. Why was he so blind? Why did he allow himself to be taken in by that cunning woman? - Zane_Haloski6mthReplied to Heavens_Ending
The first skill pill was cheap because it was a first time discount. Kind of like a welcome bonus but you have to pay for it.
I bought 1 F-Rank Skill Pill. That was 800 Sin Points. I also bought an Uncommon Spear. It had a cool design but that is about it. It was 150 Sin Points. Now I have a total of 50 Sin Points. - Zane_Haloski6mthReplied to Heavens_Ending
Sephker did that is how he got the bank skill
I bought 1 F-Rank Skill Pill. That was 800 Sin Points. I also bought an Uncommon Spear. It had a cool design but that is about it. It was 150 Sin Points. Now I have a total of 50 Sin Points. - Zane_Haloski6mthReplied to Heavens_Ending
In this world books are very rare for a certain reason. You can obtain them with enough effort. What he was reading on was his status screen mixed with his skill. A system is what I was going for.
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Thanks for the actual constructive criticism.
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