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JuanRivera

JuanRivera

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2021-01-12 JoinedFrance
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  • JuanRivera
    JuanRivera2yr
    Replied to chxrlotte

    this true

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    Tera Online [Deleted]
    Fantasy · Masquerade1010
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  • JuanRivera
    JuanRivera2yr
    Replied to Kirito_Katsumi

    where this from?

    Crystal was determined to not repeat the same mistake again, and even took the initiative to deepen the kiss herself. With Emilia's soft body pressing against her, the kiss really had another 'dimension', and within minutes, her brain already felt a little foggy as the heroine let go of all her complicated thoughts and simply indulged herself in the pleasure of the moment.
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    The Villainess with a Heroine Harem
    Fantasy · DustyDream
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  • JuanRivera
    JuanRivera2yr
    Replied to DustyDream

    thanku

    Ch 134 A Unique Palate
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    The Villainess with a Heroine Harem
    Fantasy · DustyDream
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  • JuanRivera
    JuanRivera2yr
    Commented

    thank u for chpter my first time buy privalege bc i want support u it not much but hope helps

    Ch 134 A Unique Palate
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    The Villainess with a Heroine Harem
    Fantasy · DustyDream
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  • JuanRivera
    JuanRivera2yr
    Replied to GodOfFastPass

    first one. tho i think i like to meet type 2 if can

    Ch 4 The Future Path
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    The Rebirth of Evelyn Knox
    Fantasy · DustyDream
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  • JuanRivera
    JuanRivera2yr
    Replied to Recon2024

    idk about him he obvo not deserve to die rn and its gud he didnt but i just want eve to not be merciful to enemy later so she dont mess up

    She just hoped that he learned his lesson, and there won't be any future trouble.
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    The Rebirth of Evelyn Knox
    Fantasy · DustyDream
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  • JuanRivera
    JuanRivera2yr
    Posted

    sorry if bad english like i say its my 3rd lang. anyway ill go with standard review first so dont mind... my thots at end writing quality- very good i think, i understand everything thats all i want updates: daily looks like it, very good story- its about emilia, a prince bodyguard killed then reborn as princess but betray by her lover & killed again (big sad) but now shes given a body by system and getting rdy to take revenge but hasnt forgotten self & also try to be happy very fun dialogue with everyone i like it chara- ok i think this is where the story rly shines. esp MC. amazing chara developonment i think mb the best i ever seen if u can keep it up full story world- idk tbh i never get this part in review what world idc its probs good my thots- when i read ur other story i already like it but like i say in there to me most imp is always the mc and EMILIA is awsum. i like her personality so much lol i think im more in it for emilia fun than the story but thta just me. i dont like that there r no nums in here bcs i rly liked all the nums in ur other story. i think they put lots of bricks to ur plot & make it stronger if the nums all make sense (only) ok done pls keep making good story best of lucks to emilia

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    The Villainess with a Heroine Harem
    Fantasy · DustyDream
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  • JuanRivera
    JuanRivera2yr
    Commented

    ok author i think ur story is very good and has a diff concept than most i read im not into this type so i wont continu but i wanted to say good luck and keep going ur doing gr8 ps. sorry for bad english 3rd lang

    Ch 1 Excerpt [Spoiler Warnings]
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    Transmigrated as the Emperor's Nanny
    Fantasy · Tangerqueen
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  • JuanRivera
    JuanRivera2yr
    Commented

    this looks very interesting so i wait for more chapter thx

    Ch 1 The 'Villainess System' to the rescue!
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    The Villainess with a Heroine Harem
    Fantasy · DustyDream
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  • JuanRivera
    JuanRivera2yr
    Replied to Masquerade1010

    oh ok cool i wait then

    Ch 81 Chapter 81: Two Unexpected Surprises
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    Reincarnated as a Female Cultivator [Deleted]
    Fantasy · Masquerade1010
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  • JuanRivera
    JuanRivera2yr
    Commented

    man i just finish reading this again and im sad that its not getting update anymore

    Ch 81 Chapter 81: Two Unexpected Surprises
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    Reincarnated as a Female Cultivator [Deleted]
    Fantasy · Masquerade1010
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  • JuanRivera
    JuanRivera2yr
    Replied to RackOfLife

    ohh yeah thank u i got it now

    [ Vitality: 439 ]
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    The Rebirth of Evelyn Knox
    Fantasy · DustyDream
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  • JuanRivera
    JuanRivera2yr
    Posted

    updaaaaaaaaaate pls author im begging why u always do this to us i love ur story so much bro come on im watiing lots of ppl r waiting for u to update pls its so good pls update

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    Reincarnated as a Female Cultivator [Deleted]
    Fantasy · Masquerade1010
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  • JuanRivera
    JuanRivera2yr
    Replied to JuanRivera

    ok it check out now after explained

    Spirit Power: 35 -> 53
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    The Rebirth of Evelyn Knox
    Fantasy · DustyDream
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  • JuanRivera
    JuanRivera2yr
    Replied to DustyDream

    ok thank u author im happy to know

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    The Rebirth of Evelyn Knox
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  • JuanRivera
    JuanRivera2yr
    Replied to DustyDream

    thanku author i gotchu now, it add up if u -1 for age

    Vitality: 107 -> 116
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    The Rebirth of Evelyn Knox
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  • JuanRivera
    JuanRivera2yr
    Replied to DustyDream

    ok i wait

    (100,000) energy for [Reincarnation] Requires 10,000 Vitality
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    The Rebirth of Evelyn Knox
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  • JuanRivera
    JuanRivera2yr
    Posted

    im not good at writing reviews so pls bare with me i quite webnovel for a while after both the novel i was following got dropped. i like to read from when the story starts and read as it get updated slowly. i return and look for a good novel to start. those that look ok alr have too many chapters for me. i come across this and fall in love. ok so on to the review- writing quality - my english is bad (3rd lang lol) but i think its pretty good. it makes me feel good, theres nothing i dont understand, and thats all i want. stability of update: theres daily update so im happy, pls keep it up story: its just started so i dont know but it looks like author has a lot of plan. everything is very detailed so i think the story gonna be good. chara design: to me most important is mc and i love her character in this. evelyn is very cute but also shes the mc i really want. she didnt hesitate or regret killing the guy when her life was at stake. i hate wishy washy mc. she still has good side. she adore little vivi, she like amara, she love her parents. shes not lazy and make decision fast. when she wanted to beat tristan up she went and did it. lol. overall i think very good. world background: i have no idea tbh. maybe later we know, rn too little info (im chapter 9). ok so thats done. author i hope u keep updating this wonderful story, i love it so much.

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    The Rebirth of Evelyn Knox
    Fantasy · DustyDream
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  • JuanRivera
    JuanRivera2yr
    Commented

    ok so i finally catch up with latest chapter. good to know u updating it regularly, thanku. i make a lot of comment inside chapters hope its ok. im back in this site after long time and this para comment feature is new and very fun. also i hope this is yuri harem ok, pls author im begging u. aside from good math i like some good yuri ok dont judge me.

    Ch 9 Little Devil and Big Devil
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    The Rebirth of Evelyn Knox
    Fantasy · DustyDream
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  • JuanRivera
    JuanRivera2yr
    Commented

    if duck is alr cooked just eat it no evidence no crime

    "I told her to not leave this building! I told her! Aaargh! And show she's gone and cooked the goddamn babies of the first elder's pet duck. How in the hell do I deal with this?!"
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    The Rebirth of Evelyn Knox
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