Wow, really got me there...

Great beggining and it’s really good even though there’s still some mistake but keep goingg. Looking forward to the next chapter comming up👍🏻

Wonderful, the first chapter is drag me over to the others. This is just perfect, although there some grammatical error but you get better on the recent chap, the grammar was fine. Keep up! Good luck!

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