White_Snake

Very good(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)(. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)(. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)

very good story..............................................................................................................................

I'll be rewriting this chapter

Good I like how the story is and keep up the good work.......👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

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Continue the story its geat

Continue the story I would like to see how interesting it is going to be. Still the first story was very good you could've continued it........

Decision of placing Naruto in team 8 is also very nice . At least there won't be any annoying Sakura and Sasuke. Well Shino and Hinata are you know.......Silent/Shy........But they are sill quite nice than Team 7.