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Overall, I’m really enjoying the story so far. The core system concept (especially the rebate mechanics) feels fresh and well-executed compared to a lot of other System/LitRPG stories. It has solid foundations and avoids many of the usual pitfalls. Pacing notes: The first half (or a bit more) moves quite quickly. While it’s still manageable and didn’t completely lose me, some of the early progression, world-establishing events, or character introductions felt a little rushed. Slowing down just a touch in a few key spots would let the bigger moments land with more weight. Unique paths & focus: I like that you’re introducing several interesting and distinct paths/character directions early on. That uniqueness is one of the story’s strengths. However, it currently feels a bit spread out—almost like too many threads are being juggled at once. Tightening the focus on 1–2 primary paths per major section (while still hinting at the others) might make the narrative feel more cohesive and help readers get more invested in specific characters or storylines before branching out further. Strengths: • You’re doing a great job steering clear of a lot of the common “lemons”/tropes that drag down similar stories (overpowered MC with no struggle, excessive harem elements, filler grinding, etc.). That restraint makes the story feel more mature and focused.

That’s great to hear!!!!

Enjoyed the story so far. Are you planning to continue with it??

I really enjoy the story so far but why does it have double names used for most characters and other names aren’t effected with the double names?

Agreed

Agreed

Talent Awakening! Every Legendary Summon Grants Me Assassin Attributes is a straightforward regression story with a summoner-assassin twist. Oliver regresses after betrayal and gains an SSS-Rank talent that adds assassin attributes to every Legendary summon. This creates a hybrid build focused on personal stealth, burst damage, and ambushes rather than pure summoning support. The plot moves quickly through the awakening ceremony and early academy arcs, emphasizing revenge and power growth. The “I’ll become the villain” angle is present but feels more like calculated ruthlessness than full villainy so far. Combat benefits from the attribute stacking, though it remains early to judge long-term depth. It’s a typical gamelit read that stands out mainly through its assassin-synergy hook.

Sorry to hear that

Agreed

Well up to 63 and I still enjoy it. The part where his family vanished didn’t see that coming but looking forward to see how it plays out. 👍🏻