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How did I read so many books? I definitely didn't read that many here. How is this number determined? WTF is up with the female lead stories on this site. So brainless (readers included) and sexist.
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Sorry, for the last one I forgot an uppercase letter: How could I have been so stupid! thinking I would be fine if I just didn't bother people! > How could I have been so stupid! Thinking I would be fine if I just didn't bother people! As a child, I am far too small to fill the entire chair. but she easily does the job and more. she has cornered me. > As a child, I am far too small to fill the entire chair, but she easily does the job and more. She has cornered me. That's all I'm suggesting/pointing out until I re-read. As always, thanks for the chapter!
Typo fixes & sentence structure improvements == The dinner eventually finished, I began to relax as I and Adrianna began the trek back to her room. > The dinner eventually finished. I began to relax as I and Adriana began the trek back to her room. even if they're all freaky weirdos, there the royal family. > even if they're all freaky weirdos, they're the royal family. "There... extravangant, good looking and imposing." > "They're... extravangant, good-looking, and imposing." After my response Adrianna stops walking and looks directly at me, I'm frozen by her eyes, once again pulling me into a trance, I appreciate her beauty, even for a 4-year-old child. > After my response Adriana stops walking and looks directly at me. I'm frozen by her eyes, once again pulling me into a trance, and I appreciate her beauty, even for a 4-year-old child. "Don't worry, I'll protect you" she says confidently, I hear her mumble something else afterwards, but couldn't make it out. > "Don't worry, I'll protect you," she says confidently. I hear her mumble something else afterwards, but couldn't make it out. "M'lady, Prince Oliver has summoned you for a sudden audience" > "M'lady, Prince Oliver has summoned you for a sudden audience." with an outraged expression." > with an outraged expression. "You may just be a child, but your stunning, I'm tempted to eat you up right here, but I wouldn't want to scar you" > "You may just be a child, but you're stunning. I'm tempted to eat you up right here, but I wouldn't want to scar you." "shhhhh, don't be afraid, I will take care of you" she begins to waltz toward me. Step after step getting closer, when she arrives, I am virtually frozen stiff from fear. The fact that at this moment I realized that my life is in our hands. > Shhhhh, don't be afraid; I will take care of you." She begins to waltz toward me. Step after step, getting closer. When she arrives, I am virtually frozen stiff from fear. The fact that at this moment I realized that my life is in her hands. How could I have been so stupid! thinking I would be fine if I just didn't bother people! > How could I have been so stupid! thinking I would be fine if I just didn't bother people!