When you are content to be simply yourself and don't compare or compete, everybody will respect you.
the first chapter is damn fine and the way that the author describes every tiny detail in her novel is superb. This novel will be about a woman, Lilian who developed MMORPG games for a living. The character sounds like Lilith--my MC!! Twinnie!!
Nothing terrible. Fair a small more linguistic use and rectifications. Incredible characters you've got there. Do not you think the chapters are a bit as well brief? We suggest atleast 1k words. But it's your story anyway, I don't need to meddled along with your plans. That's all I can say basing from my level of feedback.
Very curiously story, or ought to I say I cherish your story. I was a small befuddled by the beginning story but It gave me a few interest. The creator is exceptionally energetic and incredible, the book is well composed and you won't lament including it to your library. Keep up the great work creator...
This story may be a awesome studied. Each character was incredibly depicted. When perusing BL story, I'm very picky but I must say this makes me squeal a parcel. And unquestionably, typically progressing to remain in my collections. Keep it up, creator! I see forward to more improvement and sentiment between the leads.
Such a magnum opus!! I barely came over with a story like this on this stage. It is an enthusiastic brief story which instructs you to appreciate the near individuals around and be great to them. I found how delightfully this book is composed.
World building and narrating at its best. Brilliantly composed and incredibly dynamic. the pacing is fabulous and so committed. Perusing this makes you are feeling like you'll observe it all unfurl before your eyes. an outright banger and can't hold up for unused chapters. Make it happen, Make it shine!
I cherished the way creator composed this story- particularly the account fashion. The novel features a great plot, as the title recommends, paradise and different brilliant creatures are consolidated in it. The concepts shows up modern and promising. The creator is fruitful in portraying the feelings depicted by the characters and the world build-up. I am looking forward for perusing more. Keep up the great work creator.
I am a sucker in perusing stories that have "Daydream" in it, Isekai's, and indeed heroes with mysterious capacities! And this fits the area flawlessly! Seijurou may be a young man that everybody can relate. It incorporates a great and fun begin. The story has great pacing and I like how enlivened characters are portrayed. A light-hearted novel approximately enterprises and enchantment.
Axel is the sort of pioneer who continuously stands upright for the security of his pack, that's an chief of naval operations characteristic for an Alpha to have. The way the creator composes her story is fair so special to me. I'm so interested by this book. The foundation is portrayed so uncommonly well. And the Creator is so reliable with her overhaul plan.
I adore how the summation interests me and is pulling me to examined more as your composing fashion caught my intrigued. I adore the book and I am willing to hold up for more upgrades!
Transporting the character back from the past could be a truly great concept of a story. In spite of the fact that it may be cliche, but for this particular novel, particularly when it includes mythical serpents! The depiction of activities were moreover very point by point. I moreover enjoyed the subject of the story in common. Awesome work creator!