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Author sure has a weird way of looking at relationships. this chick literally did everything she could do with him except penetration, but only now after he penetrated her is she asking for forgiveness from her husband. so it's fine if your wife sucks some dude's dick and basically does everything there is to do with him as long as there is no penetration?
all these women are leading him around by the nose
Wtf does ready even mean?
would be interesting if he sent the entire fortress to his ancient realm. they could use it as their residence there. plus all the herbs inside it would grow faster. he could get it out if he wanted to use it to transport
we all know what she's thinking
also, the 3 disciples who were out lost their returning jades, but Xia Han and the other one still had theirs, so why didn't they use it before Nalan Qing's arrival and instead wanted to die fighting the demons? seriously author, you literally did not even bother to give it some thought before you published this shit. you just wanted to kill Xia Han because you didn't know how to make him accept MC's relationship with his mom. and that's cool too but at least try to make a plot.
this is quite the dumb twist you did here. it seems you wanted to get rid of him and didn't even take the time to think about how to do it. why was he out in the first place? it's been weeks since Yuhe ordered all sects to close their doors and not let anyone out and call the disciples who were already out. since it's already been weeks, there is no way Xia Han or any other disciple would still not have made it back to the sect if they had gone out before Yuhe's order. you also said that Nalan Qing has been in the sect for weeks. so you're telling me Nalan Qing was chilling on top of a tree while Xia Han was outside chased by demons? which means Xia Han only went out recently despite everything that was happening. he could have gone out to search for the other disciples who had still not made it back but like I said, it's been weeks there is no way anyone would not have made it back by now. unless of course they were caught. in which case why the hell would the sect masters or elders or Nalan Qing let a disciple like Xia Han go out? if it was some other disciple, I would accept it. it would still be a plot hole but I would accept it. but Xia Han? knowing his relationship with Xia Tian, they still let him out? author, if you're this lazy why even bother to write?
why would he mention the pregnancy like this? so weird
Wasn't the Yu sisters' father an elemental or something? and didn't Tian say that he told them his last name was Yu to hide his real name which is Yuan? and now we have this granma?