I was hoping that someone other than me was thinking this!! You did not disappoint!

That was hard to read. This book is trash.

A good story has Lead characters that you can really want to support and root for. This story does not have that.

I hate how this story is written. I want her to be a strong FL who paves her own way and her own path. She's just going to listen to him??

Exactly! So true! This isn't love. And how can I cheer on a guy like this?

What a creep! Why are we glorifying a man child that can't regulate his emotions and now this? I don't think he can be redeemed.

🤣🤣🤣🤣 God, this is so stupid! Now I really am done. She hates killing but she loves it, & they only kill people who has "hurt everything." Alright. This story needs to be thrown in the trash and then re-written with a real editor. This is one of the worst, if not THE worst things I have ever read on this app.

"So does I" What does that even mean???

This is one of the WORST things that I have ever read on here!!!! I wrote better stories when I was 10 years old! Now I know for sure, Webnovel will let anyone write a story on here. Yes, it needs an editor. The grammar is horrific. The english is bad. But that's not the only thing wrong. Even if the English was perfect, it is written so terribly! It's not just a language issue. Every other sentence is practically an example. The dialogue is unrealistic & just awful! I mean it. I wrote better when I was ten. The author needs to take this down, pay to have it looked at by an editor that speaks English & is experienced, and try again. I'm so disappointed! Author: Be grateful I'm writing this here instead of leaving you a bad, one star review. I suspect that your writing is terrible, even in your native language. Do better.

Okay, I'm out. I'm so tired of these Chinese drama stories that take years to finish, have 700+ pages, ridiculous storylines, the couple can go over 100+ chapters without talking after a breakup (which is a waste of money) etc. There are good stories on this app and this sounds like all of the generic ones that aren't.

You can't drink " a lot" of alcohol and consent. Also I know from experience. Going 0-100 without being used to alcohol will make you violently ill for days!

Please don't! This is how you get r***d. So unsafe in real life.

So she's an innocent virgin at 25 and goes from nothing to a random night with a stranger? Not realistic! In reality, it would be too chaotic and maybe even too dark to write in a club. She would also start to get sick from that drink. She also doesn't have a safety plan with someone sober being there with her to make sure she is okay. Please if anyone is reading this, understand that this is nothing like the real world and she's so unsafe. Not victim blaming, but she's setting herself in a dangerous position where she isn't in her right mind and is unsafe. She could be r***d in real life. Main character syndrome is real in this story!

Lolz that a girl that's never been to a bqr can order so easily, and not be totally drunk with that drink. You have no alcohol tolerance like that and vodka is much stronger than beer or even wine.

I hate this kind of language. Technically if you used this word, there is no such thing. Borderline woman shaming. I'm still giving the story a chance though.

Ugh! Guys need to stop saying this!

In real life, if a guy asked me this, I would be running away so fast!!

I agree! Since we know he dies, it makes the story sadder and it makes it harder as a reader to let it go. Like, he's becoming more "real" as a person. It's not a criticism of the writing. It just is going to make it so much sadder when we get to that part.

Despite her age????? This is part of the problem. Society teachers us women that our value is gone when we get older. And 30 is NOT old by the way. That was a disgusting comment. We women already have so much pressure, so much unrealistic standards that we are expected to do. Despite this, we are considered lost or old goods as we get older. This needs to stop!

This says that this book or comic is completed. It is NOT. Just be warned. I regret all the coins and fp's that I used to read this because it just ends on a cliffhanger. DongDong is the sweetest boy, but the plot....it's one kidnapping scene after another.