love the book.

this will be my last story. the site is a rip off.

put more chapters up please or the story will get boring .

why is there no update. stop string us along.

where is the updates please.

sort you're book out before asking for privileges .

I just give up on this book I'm not paying anymore for privileges I don't get. rip off site and book.

omg what a mess this book has come too. it started off brilliant and now it is skipping parts in chapter's or repeating itself. I am upset because I have paid to read this novel. sort you're novel out and correct it.

this book was great to begin with. then the repeating started over and over again. then missing part's in the story has started. has the writer got bored of the story. what a shame really.

you're ripping people off by repeating chapters . what a disgusting thing to do to you're readers. who pay a lot to read your story. stop with the repeats for heaven sakes.

Are you filling in chapters over and over with repeats because you want to cheat people out of money. you need to sort it out instead of ignoring people .

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

how short are these chapters . zzz

can we have a few more chapters today.

is this novel anywhere else under a different name. I am so bored of just 2 chapters a day. it's a good story. it just drags slowly.

please update more than 2 chapters a day.

is this book anywhere else.

also more chapters on box novel

this is on wattpad for free.

one of the best books on here. a few mistakes but funny. love it.