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Shadowy_Night_Wolf6dCommentedRed Flag #1
"WHERE WAS YOUR ATTENTION? ARE YOU BLIND OR WHAT?"- Shadowy_Night_Wolf6dCommented
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"Oh thank God. I was going to tell you the same. If anyone asks about us don't tell them the truth okay. I need to go and wind up my work. See you at the party " he said, patting lightly on my cheek and leaving. - Shadowy_Night_Wolf6dPosted
Before anything else, I'd like to thank the author for bringing this work of art to life! Thank you very much for your hardwork! There was some grammatical errors in the first few chapters but it didn't affect the story which I'm thankful for. The story development is both fast paced and not. Fast paced in terms of the fighting scenes but slow paced when it comes to the emotional side of things. Character built wise, the conflicting emotions of Raven / Ash was understandable given everything she's been through but it got slightly annoying at some point. And I agree with Dagne / Dags that Sage doesn't deserve someone like Raven. I was hoping Amara / Lucifer / Cypher would eventually drop her cold demeanor towards Raven and be honest with her feelings. But when Amara did so, it was already too late. This made me love and hate Amara's character for being "human." I feel the same way with her twin sister, Angelica / Lydia however, that's mainly because of Lydia's manipulative tendencies. The ending was painfully predictable but I'm still glad that everyone had their happy ever after ending despite all that chaos.
- Shadowy_Night_Wolf6dCommented
I'm guessing that this is for Lydia and not Aphrodite (as Aphrodite is married to Leech).
To his princess, he allowed Aphrodite her pick of the beauties that travelled the length of Monaco. The platinum blonde enjoyed the endless view of beautiful beaches and vast variety of exquisite women. - Shadowy_Night_Wolf22dReplied to TATchMe
She was probably given a short sword meant for shorter people to use. *shrugs*
And I, a 7 year old, bully a 2 meter tall grown up man. - Shadowy_Night_Wolf1mthPosted
First of all, many thanks to the author who brought this awesome, funny, intense, and heartwarming novel to life. I loved how the characters are designed, especially Neve, Erin, and Tamira. Though most of it is fantasy, the real life trauma seen in the background was overwhelming. In the end of the novel, I was somewhat expecting a 10 year gap to see if Neve's plan worked out. But reading Vee and Mary's story got me interested on how things will go down during the Final Challenge. I hope maybe there'll be a sequel for the two new main characters? Maybe a short background story will do to explain how and why Vee decided to throw her life away despite still having her family and son around.
- Shadowy_Night_Wolf1mthCommented
I have a feeling that the hunters probably made a deal with the vampires to let at least 1 or 2 vans escape.
"There were no human survivors… he went into a bloodlust frenzy and killed everyone in the van..." - Shadowy_Night_Wolf1mthCommented"I'm heading back to the camp, for now. I'll come back once I figure you've done all the fighting you're going to do. Like I said, I don't want to see those monsters again, so I'm leaving," Aphria unceremoniously announced. Before she did so, however, she flew in close and leaned in, whispering into Neve's ear, "try not to die. I do wish to see just how grateful you are, later."
- Shadowy_Night_Wolf1mthPosted
I had fun reading this web novel. It was realistic and it showed the mental, emotional, and physical health of a broken person to a healthy one or at the very least, be able to cope with it all. Not to mention, it also showed the difference between two different worlds and how a closed-minded and judgmental person can change for the better. Many thanks to the author who gave life to this short but awesome and heartwarming novel. P.S. If it wasn't for the Daily Recommendations, I wouldn't have come across this work of art. And if it wasn't for the Limited Free reading session (24 hours), I wouldn't have been able to finish reading this in less than a day!!
- Shadowy_Night_Wolf1mthCommented
"He nodded..." > "She nodded..."
He nodded her head and looked down. - Shadowy_Night_Wolf2mthReplied to DesertBerry'Adam's lap was nice and firm. So is Eve's lap...and I should stop thinking these weird thoughts now.'
- Shadowy_Night_Wolf2mthCommented
"crow prince.." > "crown prince"
"M-My lord, your carriage is here. However…..", "Move. I do not wish to be late." The butler was still speaking when the crow prince forced him to move. - Shadowy_Night_Wolf2mthCommented"Aaaaagh... Fuck." Neve quickly reached for her staff and cast {Great Healing Dart} on herself repeatedly, until the pain she was feeling had fully vanished. "Ah..." She shivered. "My nipples are vibrating."
- Shadowy_Night_Wolf2mthCommented
You may kiss the bride. 🎉
"Fits pretty-" Neve stopped as she looked up and found Erin blushing. "Um, is something wrong?" - Shadowy_Night_Wolf2mthCommentedThey have four big leaves and a big thing sticking out in the middle that's shaped like a pussy. Okay? That thing releases spores that will knock you out if you breathe too many of them in. I estimated that you can breathe in those spores for about 4 seconds before you're fucked.
- Shadowy_Night_Wolf2mthCommented[... Okay, not the most sociable people in the world, but, whatever. I just wanna get paid!] Her goal reemerged in her mind's eye. [Just you wait, Neve Stephens. I'll be donating to you like a drunk, neglected husband at a strip club soon enough!]
- Shadowy_Night_Wolf2mthCommentedWell, as I was playing the game, no, I didn't die and reincarnate. What actually happened was, that I went to the store to buy some chips, when truck-sama, no, I didn't die and reincarnate. What eventually happened was that my boyfriend came on our usual date when I returned home and he turned out to be yandere, no, I didn't die and reincarnate, I actually accidentally touched his phone, so he overreacted. What did get me in the end is that I choked on some chips, I died and reincarnated.
- Shadowy_Night_Wolf2mthCommented
No.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Shadowy_Night_Wolf2mthCommented"I, uhm, no. I'm not really into guys."