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Ralle_Levin1mthPosted- Ralle_Levin1mthCommentedChapter 1 - Rough Start.
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oh and he also has to become Batman and kill Darkseid
"Yes, and let's make the rules of this game a bit more clear. If you defeat the Great Other, single-handedly kill over a hundred thousand men and have your name known far and wide - from east to west, I will bring her to life. Whole." - Ralle_Levin1mthCommented
these last two chapters are extremely drop worthy. I would suggest a complete rewrite from the beginning at this point.
In the end, Alysanne was but a simple girl… - Ralle_Levin3mthCommented
Now that is most certainly racial profiling lol
What I find the weirdest thing about our family definitely has to do with Dad; he dresses up just like how you'd expect a racist person to dress: Jeans, boots, shirts with the American flag, a bald eagle, or a gun, and lastly, a bass pro fishing hat; to top it all off, he's got a southern accent. At first glance, you'd think he's a racist, but when you see him walking around while hugging his Japanese wife and holding his black child by the hand with a smile, some people show shocked expressions, which I find funny. - Ralle_Levin3mthCommented
he's an immortal capable of regenerating from just some specks of dust, eating should be completely irrelevant.
Taking out my water skin I took a deep swig to help the bite go down without choking on it. - Ralle_Levin8mthCommented
make it make sense
"SHE'S STILL MY MOTHER AND I LOVE HER!" Reginald roared in anger as his red eyes glowered at Alastor who had pestered him right from childhood. - Ralle_Levin8mthCommented
You ever heard of adoption? About how people view their adopted parent as their one and only REAL parent?
Valeria was, and that had been embedded in his heart and mind since when he was little. - Ralle_Levin8mthCommented
disgusting
"I hope you confide in me Reginald because I also want to confide in you. I…need you my son, more than anything or anyone," with that, she opened the door and left. - Ralle_Levin8mthCommented
HER needs, not his.
"Please Reginald, I want to bond with my son." Her heart was racing and she tried to cover the distance when he glared dangerously at her with tears in his eyes. - Ralle_Levin9mthCommented
such a mindset is hardly sustainable
Humans came first. - Ralle_Levin10mthReplied to Canine_9_6438
male version of silk
Super Serum? Take a vial of blood from Gwen somehow unnoticed and give me spider powers somehow after research? - Ralle_Levin10mthCommented
it's just 1k copper not 10k though?
Meaning, 1 Silver is around 10K Copper pieces. - Ralle_Levin10mthCommented
this is definitely a downgrade
Active Effect: Activate the technique to add your Blood into your attacks. Greatly increases their range and efficacy, while draining your blood in the process. - Ralle_Levin10mthCommented
This just seems like an absolute loss to me? He loses the control over a relevant element like blood just for some combat techniques?
This is the first time that damned Skill was triggered. I can't waste such a chance. - Ralle_Levin10mthCommented
until he turns into a dragon, he ain't a dragon
Quirk: Dragon blood. - Ralle_Levin11mthCommented
realistically shouldn't be capable of having pleasant conversations after this whole ordeal
He waited for another thirty minutes for the boy to regain a smidgen of respite before he shoved his whole fist inside his mouth and yanked out the poker I in one move, breaking the jaws and wrecking his insides once more with the retrieval and all he had to do was wait a second before another melody of tortured screams echoed through their training field. - Ralle_Levin11mthCommented
guess you never heard terry crew's story
I am also excited in my approaching journey to Seattle soon. I can't wait to see the look on the face of that father of mine will make after he sees me all alive and kicking. But for now? Let me sleep–this monologue of mine has already gone too far. - Ralle_Levin11mthCommented
it's always the one thinking he's in the right that can't see the hypocrisy
"He'll see all the good Horizon can do when he becomes a hero," Nezu says matter of factly. "That should convince him that I made the right decision, plus, he's only a child still. As mature and experienced as he may be, he's young, without his parents whispering in his ear who knows what he'll become."