please finish the story not to be pushing you so hard on the edge to finish the story quick, I'm just excited because of the story, I'm wondering about the new character and the new lead character. I love your story by the way <3

The Story is Good , It seems youre just lacking from the error and i think yoy really have a big imagination , that one good reason for you to Write a Fiction Story when you have That Lots and Big Imagination ... I really admire how you Write something like this, Just like one of youre review i saw , I think its gonna be awesome and Amazing if you Create some youre Own Character ... Im on youre side and btw ... drop youre Instagram if you had one , Lets be friends and Keep in touch😊❤