Wonderful book, unique premise I hope Cai used his scoundrel system to its full potential. Perhaps it’s future features will make him just the more OP?

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I have mentioned this in the review but I will say it again, I hope you don't get a grudge from the review. I never suggested that you originally had a grudge against me I have merely pointed out my opinion of your novel and nothing else. After all, that is what reviews are. If you call people "npc's" in real life then I believe you have a real problem sir. Anyways, I wish you luck in your endeavors. No harm done.

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Literally on the level of the likes of Shadow Slave, Lord of Mysteries and alike. Fully fledged out grammar, vocabulary and storyline. I've only currently read one chapter as I would like to binge read after more have come out. This has so much potential. You can not quite and that's a demand.

Cross out "enjoy" and replace it with "website".

I'm going to be completely honest, this is a rinse and repeat plot used a million times throughout the enjoy. Perhaps other people can enjoy it but at this point, I am quite sick of it. In the future I hope to see an original take from you, maybe not something cliché. In terms of writing quality, its quite good. A few hiccups here and there but it won't be noticed by a regular reader. Enjoyed the writing, didn't stay for the plot. I hope you will use this review as an aspect of improvement rather than hold a grudge against me. I wish you good luck in your endeavors.

I'm honestly willing to pay for editors and writers for a mass release. I'm also willing to pay an undisclosed amount to the author if this happens. Guilty, please hit me up if your interested in my offer.

Can’t wait for Autry’s backstory!

As a first novel, I really like the story and start so far. One of the better novels I've seen on this site. I hope to see more in the future and I wish you good luck.

I really like the direction this novel is moving to. Perhaps just the chapters might help better the flow of each sentence as you’ve used some out of context. World building and plot is outstanding. Hope to see more from you.

This novel is what I would call awesome sauce. The interesting concept and story may be a little overused but I can see it expanding well. All that I complain about is that there aren't enough chapters. Bahaha!

Very long chapters, perhaps too excessive? At the moment, writing quality and grammar are fully fledged out but some sentences can be too long or hard to read as you try to fit too much descriptive language. The story is hooking enough for me to read the novel but not enough for me to read 5k words. This is your writing style and I'm not complaining, maybe I'm not used to long chapters. I hope you don't take my review too harshly as I am just letting out what I feel. I'm excited to see more of the Chronicles of Carthol.

Everyone's suggestions are really helpful not matter. Don't be afraid to call things out even if people don't agree. Thank you very much for being so kind to review.

Thank you very much Big Man. We hope to see you stay till the end.

Thankyou for the review. I try to keep things simple but still create a solid image in the reader without overdoing things and making it complicated. I hope we satisfy you in future chapters.[img=update]

Thank you for the review young man! I hope we can keep you hooked for the rest of the novel.

Haha, you shameless author!

Good novel and excellent descriptive language. You've made a fledged out chapter with good grammar. I can't wait to see what's to come and I can't wait to see more.