🙂‍↕️your words are a almost as enticing as the sweet nothings my girl whispers into my ears whenevever she asks for my…intimate services.

😯”just when my girl does it” say no more. i have understood well and clearly.

I think it does something to to our lizard brain as men😭 i don’t know what, but i’m not complaining.

Missed you too gang🫂

I am once again plauged by intense lack of belonging now that i’ve caught up

this was fun🙂‍↕️ i condone

im convinced twerking has been made an art by women

i wonder what kind of beast he’ll be after lock down a SUPER high octane winger???😯

i laughed🙂‍↕️

Foreshadowing I tell you! problem is…if the foreshadowing ends up to be true… I fear his and her relationship will end up like drake and rihannas😪

i will write many stongly worded comments if this does not happen🧍🏾

they HAVE to get together🥷🏾

bro bustin out the vocals??!!!👨🏾‍🍼👨🏾‍🍼👨🏾‍🍼 (my vocal self has returned after allowing the chapters to pile up🙂‍↕️)

“dumb argument” “i’m going to explain why you’re wrong” i’m literally just an attentive reader pointing out inconsistencies for you to better the story. why get so frustrated and agressive with me? basic translation of your response to my conserns is = I’m the author, it’s my world, anything i say goes even if i’m bending the systems characteristics and things I’ve established for said world. readers should just be quiet, let me do my work and not annoy me by pointing out the inconsistency in my writing you said a “normal person with good fitness” can run 4 miles right? then a normal person with lesser ftness will run less than them. then Ryan, being less fit that a normal person with lesser fitness will run much less than even a normal person with lesser fitness. ryan is probably not making it past the 3.5 mile mark even with adrenaline. the fact that he’s desperately running for his life whenever he’s in motion is fatiguing him much faster than normal even if he’s being carried by adrenaline and fear for his life. however since you’re saying you admit that you should have included the explanation that he was actively hiding at the same time THAT’S when you can say that “i’m wrong.” at the end of this argument, all i’ve reduced myself to is a reader shunned by the author’s frustrations with me when in the beginning I said “there’s no point about me being nitpicky about it” i should have listened to myself

so instead of just saying he’s been “constantly running” for the past 20 minutes you could’ve said “running and hiding”. that’s when you could say that his “escape” didn’t just involve him constantly running after he was found when he hid that one time.

Again, he doesn’t have much body to break. He’s supposed to be sickly and weak, remember? If you were saying this about a normal person then its not that far of a stretch of a thing to understand. and that’s still a big maybe because again, that’s a normal person not some great cardio trained person. but not him. by discribing him to have such a poor condition you lowered this ‘breaking point’ of his body. his body would naturally give up much sooner than any regular person. and if you’re going to talk about the hiding part, then you clearly mentioned that he hid only a single time before he was found by the dimensional walkers then he had to “constantly run” running is an active motion. it implies movement. especially when you say “constant” if you can explain to me that even after he was found hiding the first time he continued to hide instead of just sprinting all the time then why wouldn’t you include it in the chapter instead of only leaving it to a single mention of the fact?

Adrenaline is a great thing and all but still, 20 minutes is far too much for a character you explained to be sickly. He covered 5 miles you know?☠️ (and that’s basing it off the average pace a normal person can sprint. Emphasis on the normal since he’s a sickly young man) In 20 minutes???☠️☠️ clearly he hadn’t even begun levelling up yet too. Adrenaline can do a lot of things, but it’s not taking a kid who is said to be sickly all the way up to a prolonged display of exceptional human capabilities☠️ I get that it’s probably a random number you threw in there when writing it to emphasise on his determination to live but he should’ve been dead a long time ago😭 there’s no point in me being nitpicky about the inconsistency now though i guess. The story started a long time ago and i’m only arriving now.