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Yep, try splitting the description into 2-3 parts.
pretty much just experience for the MC, a stepping stone in another word
You don't need to be a newbie reader, no one really likes walls of texts in a webnovel
Denied.
that's the longest description I ever saw for a potential xp family
reading that character desc, reminded me of
What I'd recommend is split these massive walls of text to several smaller paragraphs, makes it both look much pleasing to the eye, and feels a lot better to read
Uhh, not sure about that
ride horses not drive horses (:
He can hear various languages but all beings use the common language.. huh
its no longer EssaTerra but Essaterra, neat
Am pretty sure its God-Queen not Goddess Queen but whatever
thats kinda gae
actually I did
that thing is still a trillion times more fun then a lot of trash on this site
another one!
"I dare!" "Who?" "You'
Villian Cultivator's (thats the novel) Beginning (the novels first.. part)
"If not a human, I can still be a devil, a God"