Zabryna

Wonderful plot and characters . Hope that more chapters or a follow-up book is coming soon!

This book was so good, but took a hard turn somewhere after the first billiards tournament I don’t think I can keep up with the new harsh turns and skipped explanations anymore I’m sorry, but I’m out.

I’m a little confused. When and where did the new stuff arrive? I need a small paragraph or two so I can get some insight on how this transitioned. It’s like a new book started in the middle of another book.

This might sound crass, but where is the first floor bathroom? They each have their own with their bedrooms, but they can’t really run upstairs every time they need to. They need to watch the store. How did Hao manage before Little Xixi?

If Frey has the original novel in the laptop, why doesn’t he edit it? After all, he wrote it. So, shouldn’t he be able to tweak it?

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Good plot, I just wish it was longer! I want to see what happens next!

Unfortunately, your usual annotations aren’t loading properly. Even so, I LOVE this story! Please keep up the great work!

Ditto!

A weed is just an unwanted plant.