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XKoa4mthReplied to Azrael_DAngelYes unless your a cuck
"Fun? That's an understatement. If you're looking for entertainment, it can be found in Vegas in all forms. Gambling, drugs, sex, alcohol, machine guns, sporting events — you name it, Vegas has got it all. And so long as you have got the money to pay for it, you can experience everything in the span of a weekend."- XKoa4mthReplied to Oyakodon_enjoyer
I’m form las. Vegas and you can shoot a tank if you want lol people have no idea how crazy Nevada is in general
"Fun? That's an understatement. If you're looking for entertainment, it can be found in Vegas in all forms. Gambling, drugs, sex, alcohol, machine guns, sporting events — you name it, Vegas has got it all. And so long as you have got the money to pay for it, you can experience everything in the span of a weekend." - XKoa11mthReplied to Abyssalidiot_
Author can’t take criticism don’t even try
"It seems things aren't that safe around here, Lington, bring Silver somewhere safe." - XKoa11mthCommented
Wow how convenient
"Ah? I forgot, does it matter?" - XKoa11mthCommented
So dumb
'He still had a lot of energy to spare, even if his Skill had long stopped and its side effects were draining him… He could still raise his fists and continue the fight..' - XKoa11mthCommented
What a dumb plot you’ve created
"He is just unconscious." Said Vultus as he cracked his neck and looked at the boy - XKoa11mthCommented
He keeps contradicting himself like what even is this?
"Is it time for me to retire from it? My fighting style does not suit such heavy armor." - XKoa11mthPosted
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Stop adding different identities! It’s dumb and cringe
"... Are you alright?" Asked the white knight - XKoa11mthCommented
This changing armor randomly and hiding identity is cringe. I don’ understand what’ so appealing about it and his armor sucks just buy real armor if he can make 100k a day? Like what?
'Silver noticed a piece of white fabric strapped to the armor neck plates.' - XKoa1yrCommented
Dude please stop info dumping just get on with the story!
This world only had 4 Billion total world population. - XKoa1yrPosted
Story could have been a great adventure of a man who had to come to terms with his past life while dealing with a new world and yandare fml but it was instead weird perversion of the author who thought having the assassin be a CHILD for over 100 plus chapters was a good idea and then to charge that much money for it?? Really? It has so much potential but is ruined by him being a CHILD FOR 90% of the story! Why??? Who’s into this stuff?
- XKoa1yrPosted
A very long winded story that takes 50 chapters to basically progress to nothing. Author describes things in detail adding way too much filler(in my opinion) Characters are very edgy and repeat things and do the same thing 3 times in a chapter. Honestly the idea is good but the execution leaves a bitter taste and a migraine
- XKoa1yrCommented
Great detail and convening of emotions it’s a sighn of deep emotional understanding from the author but It needs to be spaced out condensed drama means it loses its power when done like this
"*Sniff* I-I just wanted the rice not to burn *Sniff*" I spoke through tears, as I slowly curled into mom's embrace "B-but you *Sniff* just yelled at me without asking *Sniff* I don't like that, it makes me feel bad, really bad!" - XKoa2yrPosted
Story is Very edgy And lacks a real motive for evil.Author states humans are gray nither black nor white morality wise but Fails to visualize real suffering and real choice between right and wrong and Instead makes a MC Just does stuff because ILL DO ANYTHING TO PROTECT MY SISTER!!!!!. great idea for a novel wonderful concepts and world building
- XKoa2yrCommented
Its not even a antihero MC stuck In a rock and a hard place this is just edgy teen writing at this point. bad execution
The woman screamed in agony, but Tristan didn't even pay attention to her anymore. He proceeded to dash forward, passing her as he continued his way to the massive door.