Lukos

Now just a small thought, right? What if they didn't charge and just camped outside the walls while Azog carried out his backstabbing plans? I mean, it’s completely stupid to attack fortified walls with nothing, and the dwarves can’t exactly leave those walls easily because, well, they’re waiting outside. I’m just saying, this whole fight from the start feels a lot like the movies, in the sense that it doesn’t make any tactical sense.

This fanfic drags on for over a thousand chapters yet delivers very little. The story constantly reuses arcs from the original Naruto without adding meaningful depth, while the “original” elements like the Abyss organization or Kanpu’s copy system are poorly handled and full of contradictions. Characters feel soulless, power levels swing randomly, and major plot points collapse under weak logic. You will feel like throwing up most of the time while reading this. Readable if you switch your brain off, but ultimately a “nothing burger” with wasted potential. You’d get more enjoyment just rereading the original Naruto. Translation is abhorrent and translator intejects into the story multiple times using the novel like his own comment section. This novel is something i regret reading in it's entierty, and most likely the one that will make me stop reading naruto fanfics for a while, this was so devoided of pleasure.

The story itself is interesting and has real potential, but the writing is very difficult to read. Every character, even villagers, talks in a flat, robotic way. Emotions, actions are spelled out awkwardly, sometimes even for rocks like "Rock. Is. Hard." Right now it feels like chapters are being pushed out quickly without care, which makes them come across empty and lifeless. I’d really suggest taking the time to proofread and polish each chapter, even if it means fewer updates. The story deserves more soul and effort than just being rushed out as-is. Had to repost as my previous post was shadow banned.

The story here isn’t the strongest, but it’s unique enough to keep readers entertained throughout the journey. What I mean is, the plot is intriguing at first but becomes somewhat repetitive, as each new stage of the world feels like a variation of the previous one. New content is added to keep it fresh, but with only partial success. The progression system also leans too heavily on luck and random encounters, which makes the protagonist’s strength feel less earned. That said, it still works, since the MC isn’t the smartest person around, though compared to many of the other Chinese “players,” around him he might actually come across better than expected. The power-ups and stage progression are handled well enough, with danger and growth balanced at a decent pace. There’s also plenty of romance, which is executed reasonably well. However, this novel doesn’t really have strong reread value, it’s more of a one-time experience, and you often feel it could’ve been shorter instead of stretched out as much as it is.

This is a phenomenal comic, one of the best Chinese comics on the market. The world-building and setting are absolutely amazing. What begins as a tragic story unfolds into an incredible adventure, where the MC and his companions face countless stages of growth. Each stage is unique, filled with new dangers, while old threats continue to pursue them, keeping them constantly on edge. They never truly catch a break, yet they always find a way to push through, whether through clever strategies, painful sacrifices, determination. The writing makes every victory feel earned, and the journey feels alive and unpredictable. I’ve read many Chinese comics, but this one stands a step above the rest in quality and execution. My only real complaint is how quickly it reads each page is so easy to consume that I often wish the chapters were longer. Still, as the story progresses, it becomes the kind of masterpiece that almost demands a full reread to truly appreciate everything it offers.

One of the "OG's" of the genre, it has ok world building, more than just gate spamming for power, though it may not be perfect of a novel, this is very new-reader novel friendly. As the systems and power plays in place make it easy for anyone to follow, and have the MC move forward while still being interesting to capture attention, there's plenty of aspects that lack depth, but considering the fact this is a short novel it's done well enough for it's purpose.

This is actually a pretty fun read, it involves comedy, and dark elements really well, the story includes wars and some tactical choices, the MC is completely bonkers but it fits into the way they build it up, and has a somewhat smart and caring MC. Keep it up!

It's decent and captures attention, but the harem makes this story downgrade from interesting to below average, dropped it at around the 160 chapter, especially the way it's done not because he made himself one, getting Ino to be the way she is, and Naruto giving this woman so much trust is crazy, especially since in the original naruto the world is so dark and with so many characters hungry for power, this Naruto in my opinion would of been dead long ago the way he is now. Hinata change of mentality makes no sense, as it's too drastic, Hinata fell in love with naruto because of who he was aka as in "Kind and loving", and Naruto now is no longer the one she loves, there's just no way that a insensible and devoid of emotion Naruto can be loved by Hinata and her becoming a lynch to him in this way. Maybe if the story started earlier and changed her from much earlier this would of been possible, but apparently this story has these kids at already 15 years old, you don't change someone mentality and feelings in a month, no matter the amount of bloodlust. I love the ruthless Naruto, it makes this engaging for me, but the world around him doesn't feel like it can adjust to this type of personality, not when the story is following pretty much 1 to 1 copy of original naruto (even Sakura's ending is a copy of the original as she's not exactly changing anything). It's worth a read if you are into naruto parodies, but only if you don't have any other good ones to enjoy.