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it is getting more and more out of hand
*Face Palm* that thing is for free? where is the fun in that
looks like Vader found out he has not only a son but a daughter too
it doesn't make it any better that we called our planet dirt
wierdly enough I find HK-47s and HK-51s voices soothing and calming
to go with the Church of the Force storyline instead of The hutt one was a perfect choice. Thumps Up Author!!!
not a suprise
its not a bad thing in my opinion
Actually. I think this game made it so that there can be doublicated names and no nonsesical Names. It would be very Wierd if SithMaster69 where to become a jedi. Or PalpatinIsASithLord join the senate.
my mistake because of the mission she is now level 21
huh?... oh OH! the mission i am such an airhead thats why she is not 7
wait isn't his Mom right now 7??? or did i miss some plot point?
Mother's intuition is so similar to the Force its scary
yeah Yoddel or something like that
I do not like it if the character adresses in author persona constantly the reader in a setting where he shouldn't. but 5 Stars on character and world building at but only 1 star on the others as a way to repersent what i adressed bevor. I stopped reading after 24 cha. and will not continue, it got really annoying.
I have to agree on that, I definitely went of topic there and did not really focus on what you wrote.
that would be better
Wasn't it so that her Explosion spell needs incredible amount of Mana, and she herself has just enough mana to cast this spell but she could have used 'more powerfull' (usefull) spells like yunyun has her clan has superp magic abilities and mana capasity and only the explosion magic has such a down side of needing so much mana for casting one spell.
A solid Story with everything I like. The Author said luckily that he won't drop the story! I can wait between 1 month (as I don't expect my self to life longer than that) and 3 years (as I have a bad memorie and I will forget things more easily) for the next chapter, no more than that. I really hope that a new chapter comes out bevor I die, or worse I forget about this story!! Good Luck Author, This Suicidal Brain Dead Mad Human loves your story!