Good job overall author. The background is clear and easy to understand.

Divided this please as it confusing ✌️

Background design, backstory and concept is something new and uniques, but the prologue is a bit short for me. I understand as this is your first novel so I gave 5 star, as for someone new it quite amazing tbh. But the arrangements could be better if you edited the few early chapters but after that everything started to work nicely and amazing to read. Please continued your work author.