MrAyer

Well, I constantly give gifts to the other people without him getting anything.Besides, a little bit of f****** recovery or some stupid s*** like that, we get it.You're gonna give him a lot of women that's perfectly fine but constantly giving them powers when they interact is too much. Give him something and then have him. Go in the system or some other thing, and give him a gift from that. There's no need to constantly give them superpower gifts when they're already stronger than him. Sure, he's gonna recover his powers down. The line, but at this point it's gonna take ages. And everyone around him is gonna be stronger than him. I'm going to do something b******* , plot armor s*** instead of just letting the story progress

Giselle

Honestly , the best pokemon fan fiction i've read on here

Damn bro, why his name so much better than ash Richard Ketchum

There’s no need to keep repeating the same thing we get it. He’s reborn with his memories. It’s been stated.

When you think about it, it’s so reasonable it’s laughable that’s not in the main show. Honestly, Pokémon can combine their skills.

this is honestly one of the better Pokémon fan fixed. I’ve read. I enjoyed the pacing and the main characters development. The biggest thing that I have to say about it is the main characters relationships is wacky. It feels like the author is forcing every female character he meets to fall in love with him or start a relationship with him when he barely puts any effort in relationships he already has and it’s kind of annoying. Another thing is the future timeline that is shown every now and then which basically spoils the future of the story we don’t need to know that he has kids or actually married to, but it shows you anyway, which is annoying and takes away some kids, and they’re all living in some big floating island above the world my opinion it just takes away some of the fun reading it because he’s done one or 18 with Misty like the orange and nothing else. He gives him a kiss every now and then and only during league championship conferences when the women kissing first, and then after the ads, basically nothing for the whole next ark he just meets more people they give him a kiss on the cheek and then they move on and then the league and they are all like i love you that’s my biggest complaint about it. Other than that my story to Pokémon everything else is good. It’s just a relationships, a wacky and the future timeline.

what it means is the author, forcing the main character to get more relationships Rather than spending time right about the main people, he’s with now besides misty and yellow they’re still four are the girls he supposedly likes but he doesn’t contact them or anything to other story. It’s just the author and more girls Adam from different regions. Besides the ones he’s already with.

wow, the first time it’s been brought up in like 60-70 chapters

these times skips are annoying basically anytime he contacts someone that’s gonna be in the future. It shows him that what’s the point of suspense in relationship or who is gonna be with like that if you’re just gonna tell us before the story even gets to that point, it ruins the progress of the storyand suspense and what’s gonna happen?