Okay so: 1) Thank you for saying that my story was well written, even if you lost interest 2) Another thank you for the advice. I've always struggled to reign in my urge to just keep typing. I was that way back in school, and am still that way today, even though I'm working on it a lot more. and 3) I'm glad that you actually told me about this because I'd been caught between spreading the details out over time, building up the vision subtly instead of just using an info dump(which is what I decided to go with). I probably won't change the chapters I've already written, but I'm going to try to take that into account later on, so yeah. I probably took this way too seriously, huh?