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Elonta

Elonta

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  • Elonta
    Elonta3yr
    Posted

    Hello, I am reviewing this work as a way to get more readers to see my work! This is one of two works of mine that I am looking forward to showing to any future readers. This is my first Isekai but I have always wanted to write my own spin on the genre. I am still a fledgling writer so I hope you all will be patient with me in the coming future. But, I can take punches, too! So, if I make any serious mistakes please do call me out on them and I will try my best to fix them! Any info you should know about the MC: He may come off as selfish at times or even a little self-serving but he will still do what he can to help others as he wants to live his new life to the fullest and without holding anything back. He will also not be a Village Chief forever but that is all I will say about that.

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    I Found Myself In Another World But as a Village Chief...Dragon?
    Fantasy · Elonta
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  • Elonta
    Elonta3yr
    Commented

    Am I the only one who imagines Beluga as sounding like Video Game Dunkey

    Beluga gazed into his eyes. "I've never told a joke in my life."
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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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  • Elonta
    Elonta3yr
    Replied to lozlo

    I kinda want you to check out my novel. I want someone like yourself to tell me what my writing is lacking before I get too set in my ways. I want to make my novel something good, great if possible. But since it's my first I can't help but wonder if it's good, whether objectively or literally. I hope you would check it out and give me an honest critique on it.

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    Legend of Swordsman
    Eastern · Mr. Money
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  • Elonta
    Elonta3yr
    Commented

    Can't be mad at Death in this situation.

    Death felt like killing Rean. Unfortunately, Rean is already dead.
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    Death... and me
    Fantasy · Suiyan
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  • Elonta
    Elonta3yr
    Commented

    I believe you may be missing some words in the first sentence? Correct me if I am wrong, though! It is great otherwise.

    This chapter has been deleted.
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    Blank Story
    Action · Campoccino
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  • Elonta
    Elonta3yr
    Commented

    *tips fedora* M'lady I couldn't write that with a straight face by the way lol

    With a self-assured expression, Roman stared into her eyes. "The pleasure is all mine..." Then, he took her white-gloved hand in his, and bowed as he brought it to his lips, holding it a moment longer than customary as he locked gazes with her.
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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
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