The work has not been updated for a long time, this is the only big minus. pros: a hero is a man with a normal personality (which is rare for the fandom) This is Jeremy who, like Tyler and Matt, was merged in canon. there is a system that gives goodies (although it cheats heavily in favor of gg) the hero is a young teenager, the mistakes he made are completely appropriate for his age.

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I like it more, to be honest, Tyler and Jeremy are the most unrealizable characters. I will wait for the production.

Can the graph be created?

Welcome back , where are the extra blacks from ? When will his brides join him?

where does the author force Lily to be with Severus, although he won't forgive her before?

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more 😍😍😍

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more. ..

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the author wants an intrigue with the house of snakes + a relationship with Lily. is it possible to find out if the hero will punish looters?

It's cool, although it's unclear why Greengrass treats looters normally, although their loss would still be better.

and if her place is Veela, there's definitely an empty character in the fanfiction.

Come on Severus doesn't say take it to the wardrobe.

I don't think he was watching it's Moody and Harry's responsibility.

it is unclear why Dumbledore should be steamed by Snape and so creeps towards him and trusts him.

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