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Are you going to continue the story about Jeremy (just for the fun part)? and yes, TV with girls is not bad.

it's great to add the firstborn, it would be good if this one gets a girl for himself, but it looks like the names of the older brothers.

the author, and here, as in the original, will Kate meet with others? or will you still protect the hero's psyche?

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Author, will you come back or stop waiting

The work has not been updated for a long time, this is the only big minus. pros: a hero is a man with a normal personality (which is rare for the fandom) This is Jeremy who, like Tyler and Matt, was merged in canon. there is a system that gives goodies (although it cheats heavily in favor of gg) the hero is a young teenager, the mistakes he made are completely appropriate for his age.

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I like it more, to be honest, Tyler and Jeremy are the most unrealizable characters. I will wait for the production.

Can the graph be created?