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Ami_yaye

Ami_yaye

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2021-01-04 JoinedGlobal
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  • Ami_yaye
    Ami_yaye3yr
    Posted

    The synopsis on its own piques curiosity and then the read, very good work author. A few editing here and there is needed with some misspelling but that's all. Waiting to see the story unfold more!

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    The lost Prince is My Lord
    Fantasy · olive
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  • Ami_yaye
    Ami_yaye3yr
    Posted

    The book gives the details to the story sequentially. Everyone loves a good badass mafia story but perhaps author could be less detailed...? Getting to know the characters so well in the first chapters take the mysterious vibe away. Beautiful write up otherwise!

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    A Possessive Mafia Leader
    Urban · 4Maggievasiredz
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  • Ami_yaye
    Ami_yaye3yr
    Posted

    Not gonna lie not a fan of Asian stories in general so there was a bit of struggle with understanding terminology but you're such a good writer your descriptive wordings worked me through and as I got into the book I must say interesting piece you've got here. Good work!

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    The Greatest Villain is Afraid of Cats
    LGBT+ · Lemone
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  • Ami_yaye
    Ami_yaye3yr
    Posted

    Very mystic-y. At first I was confused but then realised as all mystery story go I shouldn't get everything on the spot it won't keep my interest for long if so. Very much felt like I was watching a movie. Awesome Author!

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    Mia Isn't a baby girl
    Urban · Black Flute of Love
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  • Ami_yaye
    Ami_yaye3yr
    Posted

    Just wanna say... Gr8 work! Loved it! Was ttly immensed in the dramatics. Characters really ran their emotions through. It can actually be a movie. Good work author!

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    HER BABY’S SECRET
    Urban · Ebunoluwa Ademide
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  • Ami_yaye
    Ami_yaye3yr
    Posted

    The character intro great. Very descriptive with the scenes and interactions. Overall you know what your doing author 👏🏿 great job keep it up. Slow burn but great.

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    DNA
    Teen · Kendall
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  • Ami_yaye
    Ami_yaye3yr
    Posted

    Good work author. The book is quit detailing and religious and good timing. But I was just getting into the book...like I typed, good story line. I loved that she did not just bagged the job thing very real life-y. Tumbs up author.

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    Bittersweet
    Urban · Oracle
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  • Ami_yaye
    Ami_yaye3yr
    Commented

    Good work author. The book is quit detailing and religious and good timing. But I was just getting into the book...like I typed, good story line. I loved that she did not just bagged the job thing very real life-y. Tumbs up author.

    Ch 12 Undertone
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    Bittersweet
    Urban · Oracle
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  • Ami_yaye
    Ami_yaye3yr
    Replied to Oracle17

    Duely noted.

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    REPERCUSSIONS
    Fantasy · Ami_yaye
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  • Ami_yaye
    Ami_yaye3yr
    Posted

    You have a good story going on here can't lie. You've got a vision for your book and seem to know exactly where you want to take it to. Apart from the I's coming on more, all's good. Thank you for the read

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    Tangled with the CEO
    Urban · caia clearwood
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  • Ami_yaye
    Ami_yaye3yr
    Posted

    Interesting work. It takes courage to write a scary story and thumbs up. Please pay attention to some of the dialogues that are missing quotations other than that you doing good!

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    The Wrong Turn....
    Horror · Y.R. Novella
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  • Ami_yaye
    Ami_yaye3yr
    Commented

    Interesting work. It takes courage to write a scary story and thumbs up. Please pay attention to some of the dialogues that are missing quotations other than that you doing good!

    Ch 8 Good for nothing...
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    The Wrong Turn....
    Horror · Y.R. Novella
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  • Ami_yaye
    Ami_yaye3yr
    Posted

    The chapters follows sequentially. Descriptive. Certain details are brushed over which I'm temp confused over a bit then bounce back which can be good nd bad. In the good sense urging the reader to forge ahead for clarity overall the book has potential, diction is gr8, it's good.

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    Should have been better
    Teen · joondabest
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  • Ami_yaye
    Ami_yaye3yr
    Replied to Joondabest_

    Thank u

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    REPERCUSSIONS
    Fantasy · Ami_yaye
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  • Ami_yaye
    Ami_yaye3yr
    Posted

    You have a good story line great concept and confident scenes.; the fights accurate descriptions attention to minuscule details. Absolute perfect timing introduction of the characters readers easily grasp what their behavior should be or would develop as the story progresses. Captivating and I love it!

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    SULTAN
    Urban · Atinuke
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