Kagurel

Me

I think that you managed to do a great history and your writing style is perfect.

This is my frst review and my english is not god-tier, so I apologize if there is anything that can't be understood. First of all, I have to say that even though this book doesn't have too much chapters (at least in the moment I am doing this review) I think that have a great history with an MC that is not really OP but has a great Character Design with a strong sense humour sense that makes him singular and memorable. I personally love how he reacts in his mind when he sees Xianxia tropes like an arrogant young master, a jade beauty or a crazy murder MC. About the history I can't say too much for now (the premise is engaging and the author is doing great things with that). About the World Background, I think that this history presents a logical world and (at least from what I readed) a reality that show us how a Xianxia world is for the people who is not a protagonist in his/her history Xianxia. I personally recommend this book.

I knew that, sorry if my englih is bad and I didn't write it right but I was asking about the threats to the royal family that are Chen family's work.

I have a question. I dont remember if it was mentioned earlier but if outside the empire arent any other empires or kingdoms, then the Chen family only protects the royal family from the other families and sects or outside the empire are another dangerous races or monsters?

Thanks for the chapters. I love how this worldbuilding seems to be more logical than usual worldbuilding in xianxia

I love this

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter. It was funny.

Thanks for the chapter. I don't think that the chapter is unsatisfactory, in my opinion it represents a satire to the young princesses typical of Chinese novels. Also I want to greet the author because even it's your first novel I think you have done a great job with the world building (at least for now).