btw i do not think that u just copied the story it looks like u put a lot of effort into the story.

I really like the character design in this story, the MC feels like a real person without making them feel annoying / frustrating to spectate. The events of vulnerability happen at the right time to not get in the way of the story and they do not happen often enough to make them seem like a person who can only cry and mope. They also do not seem like a soulless badass MC that has no thought put into them. Docked points cuz it kinda seems like a arifureta clone :p Docked points cuz kinda the coming to power event seems like a arifureta clone :p

I agree something to add is the characters act always childish and consistently brag, then change their tune very quickly after they start losing (this happens with almost all characters). also seeing HAHAHAHA in all caps all the time is annoying :p

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