The_Arkhon

Much better seeing this Verizon of him, not a fna of all the angst, even if it was character development

Really don't understand what's going on and how you'll be taking this in the future. Would have been better if he as overpowered got stronger and then eventually toured around the DC multiverse then left and travel to different verses, now it's just to chaotic

Should change this senior to just to the name or to miss, Mrs or Mr when speaking

*Hephaestus

Should make this a regular and stand alone, like where it's going and how's it going so far. Sad you stopped spear boy but this makes up for it

Really hope his height doesn't grow anymore. It's just weird, in another world yeah it would work, but have a more than 3 Metre tall man

Better than having one of his siblings as his love interest and that to as a god king being of power if you can define Ra as such. Would like more of his kingdom building. This type of creation, when we know he's powerful and not some random 'ophis' type being just comes and upsets it

Try mtlarchive and search marvel in library, you'll find it pretty easy

Read thing one, it was nice u until he goes to DC, then I think the author changed and the story becomes completely different

Dam, don't know what to say about that anymore. Officaly my favorite fanfic that I've read in past few years. Will definitely be one to remember.