Latiaslovar

Very interesting. Love the imagination of these chapters.

In my opinion I don’t feel like he needs a human form. Everything is progressing just fine with his snake body and Sahara being warm and sandy, makes being a snake even better fit than if he was human.

Love the plot and cant wait to see where this is going. Thanks for more wonderful writing.

The more interesting a story the shorter it actually feels reading it. Wonderful chapter.

Nice woder what the metal monster wants with him. Acting kinda sus.

Best chicken mc returns better than ever.

Keep up the wonderful work! Story is great as always.

Hope everything with your assignments goes well. wonderful chapter.

Amazing. love the story so far. Hope that you’re able to make Raas and Sahara’s adventure fully realized.

Cant get enough of this story. it gets hard to read at some points with the grammer mistakes, but i know what you were going for and have started auto correcting them in my head as i read. dosent scare me away from this great story tho, keep it up.