You mean Alyssa?

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I really love the novel as it contains all the standard cultivation novel themes in one book. However, the dialogue between characters gets weird and robotic. The worst thing is that the author does not upload frequently, or the novel would of been higher rated, which of get more readers. I am frustrated and anxious for every update, checking everyday with a sliver of hope. Wish the author would start writing new chapters soon.

As this is the first book of the author, giving what I gave for the review is pretty lenient. Grammar mistakes are everywhere, breaking my immersion whenever I stumble upon them. The story itself is nothing exceptional. The characters have a couple sentence describing them, nothing like getting to know the characters more as the story progress. The world background is also standard litrpg/fantasy settings, with humans, elves, dwarves, and demons as the enemy. The Author's POV is just a better version of this.

What I pictures in my head:

This book’s quality is not bad, but its characters and story development is just unrelatable. MC just get op skills after skills, coincedince just always happen when he is about to die. Also, what is up with the MC’s and other characters’ mentality and sense? MC just kill people in game which cause them to die in real life after an unpleasant encounter. Yes, his previous life was miserable and unfortunate due to people acting inhumane. But his action this life just shows that he is becomig the people he hates the most. Next is the characters, Alex for some reason got offended and mad at Liam when he offers her a slave contract when she came to ask him for help, not the other way around. She also just don’t like him and be mad all the time. The author is just trying to create a villain in the book but does it so horribly. Whenever Alex has an opportunity to screw him, she go out of her way to do so. These characters just don’t make any sense. The writing at times also kicks me out of the immersion of the world. Couldn’ t force myself to go pass 80 chapters. Don’t read unless you don’t have any brain cells left to lose.

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When people have a limited lifespan, they would seek immortality. Whereas if you have immortality, you would seek what you don’t have, death.

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PLATINUM

You mean numb down?

Every transmigration novel

Thanks for the amazing chapter

Overall, I would say that this novel is very well-written and will hook your attention throughout the story. Although it would be nice if the author did not dump a lot of information at once and spread it throughout the story. Writing Quality: The writing quality is honestly nice and there is a lot of adjectives that helps the reader imagine and visualize the scenes or characters better, but sometimes I can spot some grammar and sentence structure issues, which is not a big deal. overall, 5 stars. Story Development: The story development of this novel is very interesting and well done, each time after an arc ended, I would keep wanting to go on to the next one. Then, two days later, I found out that I caught up to the newest chapter and became pretty sad. The plot is fresh to me and is very interesting. There are some minor plot holes here and there if you read carefully, but it's not a big deal. Overall, the story development will attract you to this world and make you really focus on the plot and make you forget time. Story development, 5 stars. Character Design: The characters are all fine but if there was more variety and things that can make each character stand out, it can make remembering each characters easier, especially the female. All I remember is that they have perfect skins, which is not much but that's the description that the author have for all the female leads, which is sort of bland. It would be nice if there is something that stands out for each girls, which would make it a lot easier to remember them. Otherwise, all the characters are nicely designed. Character design, 4 stars. World Background: The world background do have some similarities with other popular novels, but without those, I wouldn't be here since that's what I was looking for. The manual graded from 1 to 5 stars is kind of nice, the system don't show up as often as in other stories, and the world do have some unique things that is special to this story. Story development, 5 stars. I would like to thank to author for blessing us readers this amazing piece of story and even though most of us don't know the difficulties being an author, I appreciate you a lot for making the novel a fantastic one and I can tell that you put in a lot of effort in writing this. Thank you.

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thx for the chap

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thx for the chap