WiseJoker

I was thoroughly impressed by this book and its translation! The translator did an exceptional job of capturing the essence of the original story while making it flow effortlessly in English. Every chapter felt engaging and well-paced, making it nearly impossible to put down. The story itself is captivating, full of rich characters and a plot that keeps you on the edge of your seat. It's clear that a lot of care and attention to detail went into this translation, and I’m grateful for the seamless reading experience it provided. Highly recommend!

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I really love the novel as it contains all the standard cultivation novel themes in one book. However, the dialogue between characters gets weird and robotic. The worst thing is that the author does not upload frequently, or the novel would of been higher rated, which of get more readers. I am frustrated and anxious for every update, checking everyday with a sliver of hope. Wish the author would start writing new chapters soon.

As this is the first book of the author, giving what I gave for the review is pretty lenient. Grammar mistakes are everywhere, breaking my immersion whenever I stumble upon them. The story itself is nothing exceptional. The characters have a couple sentence describing them, nothing like getting to know the characters more as the story progress. The world background is also standard litrpg/fantasy settings, with humans, elves, dwarves, and demons as the enemy. The Author's POV is just a better version of this.

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This book’s quality is not bad, but its characters and story development is just unrelatable. MC just get op skills after skills, coincedince just always happen when he is about to die. Also, what is up with the MC’s and other characters’ mentality and sense? MC just kill people in game which cause them to die in real life after an unpleasant encounter. Yes, his previous life was miserable and unfortunate due to people acting inhumane. But his action this life just shows that he is becomig the people he hates the most. Next is the characters, Alex for some reason got offended and mad at Liam when he offers her a slave contract when she came to ask him for help, not the other way around. She also just don’t like him and be mad all the time. The author is just trying to create a villain in the book but does it so horribly. Whenever Alex has an opportunity to screw him, she go out of her way to do so. These characters just don’t make any sense. The writing at times also kicks me out of the immersion of the world. Couldn’ t force myself to go pass 80 chapters. Don’t read unless you don’t have any brain cells left to lose.

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