bobbyboulders

Easily one of the best stories on this website. I don't understand the persistence of it being slow. It grows on you. It's not a rampant power fantasy. The growth is present and satisfying. Sometimes I do wish the author added more background detail and dates. Also chapters are short in length but still satisfyingly dense to read. Longer chapters please.

I know Bloodborne but not MGS. I really should try to play it though. However, the past few games you have chosen I sadly know nothing about.

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The grammar is pretty bad. PLEASE run it through grammarly or some AI! BUTTT!!!! BIG BUTT. The story and plot development is one of if not the best I've read. The characters are also amazing. I would say all of them are real. If you do make this change, it will be 5/5!!!

Did he just introduce AIDS into middle earth?

Sorry to say, but there are like 3 translations of it on this site, and the one you mentioned has an older version with more chapters by another person

TFTC! Your writing is one of the cleanest on the website ;-; PLEASE keep this story up!

Why are the words scrambled? What's going on? Fix the chapter please

Instead of saying "So fast" you can replace it with something Guy would totally do like "WoOH!" P.S Plz don't copy my exact example XD

GRAMMAR QUALITY IS DROPPING. RUN THIS STUFF IN GRAMMARLY OR SOMETHING