hmm, in my opinion, this story blows let me start of with the Mc, the mc has a massive victim mindset he thinks everything wrong that happend to him is everybody's else's fault, and doesn't take responsibility for anything he does. I don't know who the love interest is yet but it looks like its going to be tigress, which is an absured pair if it is her mostly because she thinks in black in white most of the time and this mc is definitely not a good person also I'm not sure if the story is heading into a redemption arc for the mc but if he is, in the end of the day he has killed hundreds of innocent animal/people so no amount of redemption is gonna clean him of those murdered. overall, I think the author took the original villain of Kung fu panda 1 and made a vastly inferior one here and more boring retelling of the movie too.

naah, I really can't read a fanfic where the mc kills a cat for no reason🫤🫤🫤

this is my cat👍

yea this fic is pretty bad ngl the Mc in the first few chapters kills a whole wearhouse full of people for a phone instead of waiting for them to sell it but then later on he acts stupid in front of the bat family and starts telling the Jojo story all in all this story feels like a fanfic whith close to zero potential.

⚠️ WARNING GLAZING INCOMING ⚠️ This is by for my favorite fanfic. I could tell you put so much work into this one. I hope this fanfic never ends

ngl you really convinced me to go back to reading your story.😳

hmm I like the idea and plot of the story but once you introduced the giga thing I lost all interest you pretty much wrote yourself into a corner there is no stakes now that everyone can literally be immortal forever and now when somebody dies it would be really hard to explain why he did. And for this reason I'll stop reading this one. Good luck with the story tho.

futa natasha 🤨🤨🤨😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳___________________

bruuuh, mc is really annoying. I also don't like how he's apparently a 10 out of 10 psychologist who knows everyone's emotions perfectly and any given moment also the Mc's is really big prick ngl it's just he's way of speech that bothers me he sounds like one of those trashy prank youtube channel's hosts.

I like your story it is in my top 5 best one piece fanfics. The way the characters interact with each other and talk feels natural and fun to read. I also like the Mc the only problem whith this story is his devil fruit I really don't see the reason you went with such a boring and tedious devil fruit when u teased us whith a far superior one in the beginning, the fights in the latest chapters also made no sense to me the fights in the beginning of the story were far superior in my opinion.

ngl I still really hate the devil fruit 🫤

the reason I liked coiling drogans was because the people in it were so much better than other Chinese novels that are all about petty revenge and face slapping but in your story you made them all into young masters I wouldn't mind if u did it to some random characters but u did it to the main family when they were super nice and chill in the original, the mother was literally a Saint and for some reason you made her petty and comically evil ,all in all if you liked coiling dragon for its refreshing pace of almost no young masters this story is probably not for you. also, Ace is super au he is not even a little bit like in one piece it you should think of Ace as an oc in the fanfic.

ima be honest I have no clue what's happening in this fight😖😖

naaaaaah mc glazing 💀💀💀

interesting concept but ultimately ruined by generic copy and paste mc. I just really don't see the appeal of edgy, no emotion,cocky, mcs. I just find it to be so boring.🫤

I like the story in the beginning, kinda boring and slow but still enjoyable, but then the Mc and his crew started to kill hundreds of people at a time and nobody seemed to care about the massacres he was committing, I don't get how he hates arlong while he's at least 10 times more evil and vile then him.

bruh why did she kill so many people that were just doing their jobs

couse he accepted the break up duhh

"Americans have firearms a don't cause choas" meanwhile almost the only country in the world with school shootings💀💀💀💀

naaaah he meant this