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Deathfighter_81413hCommented[Host has received Mysterious Egg!]- Deathfighter_8142dCommented
You either mean service or ceremony, the church cant begin.
Soon the church began. - Deathfighter_8142dCommented
for example, what? if you say for example you should have an example!
We still talked about some little details of decoration, for example, but these weren't huge things. - Deathfighter_8143dCommented
Welp its a great try but ultimately useless as it had nothing to.do with the middle.east
I earned my own room, a computer with internet access, and access to any book I desired. I delved into computer science and programming, leveraging Tony Stark's talent without his memories. In 2001, worried about the 9/11 tragedy potentially occurring elsewhere, I meticulously tracked suspicious activities in the Middle East and preemptively alerted the US government. - Deathfighter_8143dPosted
Really great story its rare in itself that TV series like this are used and when to be used so well as well. The only Problem that I could see happening here might be the author running out of ideas/motivation to write or losing focus of the story as it seems a bit fast paced. The story to this point however has given me no indication that that might happen and as such Ill continue to watch this story and the author with great interest.
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Could you maybe add like how much is required to complete something like x/10 times to get rid of maxie completely, or x/10 out of training for new power and so on?
Book Reading (Get rid of Maxie): - Deathfighter_8144dCommented| اون موقعي که بهم گفتي رسيده انجمن ها الان آماده هستن اندازه آنها باید کنترل شود و شما می دانید چگونه. سه سال گذشته ، برگرد من از کار کردن تنها اينجا خسته و خسته شدم |
- Deathfighter_8144dCommentedNothing much happened that day. Robert went back to the brothel to have another look and see after them. He was sowing the seeds of his plan every day. He listened to what they had to say and joked around with them. He refused to bed them, however. He was a smart man. He knew about STDs and in this unprotected world, he was not going to suffer an STD. He would have to invent the condom first ... or die a virgin. But virginity is cool ... at least he told himself that.
- Deathfighter_8148dCommentedProfessor McGonagall, perched on the edge of the teachers' stand, couldn't hide her shock and a hint of envy as she watched Harry Potter, the newest sensation of the Slytherin Quidditch team. How she wished he were wearing Gryffindor's colors. Beside her, Professor Snape wore a smug expression, his initial skepticism about Harry's participation in the game now replaced by a sense of vindication. He had doubted the wisdom of allowing a first-year student, especially one as smart as Harry, to waste his time in games when he could study. But as he watched Harry's performance, Snape realized that this was not just a whimsical pursuit of a teenager; Harry had a plan, and he had the capability to execute it flawlessly.
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I like the premise of the story and its Idea I also love slice of life stories with a character excelling in mundane task and while this sounded like such a story it was ruined for me by the introduction of the 'paranormal'. This even if written in better english and quality makes it no different than the average Gamer/Cultivator/System novel.
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Blood for The Blood god! Skulls for tge Skull throne!
— Blood! Give us blood! Moooreeee!!! - Deathfighter_81414dCommented
I thought it was still clutched to her chest? How did it get on the table then?
The book is still there, lying on the coffee table like a beacon in the darkness. I reach for it, my hands trembling slightly as I pick it up and examine the cover. It's old and worn, the title faded and barely legible. I squint, trying to make out the words, and my heart skips a beat as I realize what I'm holding. - Deathfighter_81415dPosted
I'd say its typical MTL, but that would be lying because the mistake be it grammar or similiar of such a make that I doubt they're made by a machine the first few paragraphs are a perfect example for this. Its a real shame because the premise of the story is very interesting and something Id normally really enjoy but the writing and mistakes just ruin the story. Nothing is wrong with not having perfect fluency in the King's English, yet it is important to acknowledge such a shortcoming and try to avoid or at least minimise these things through help. The help can be in the variant of a Beta/Editor/Proofreader or in a digital program in the forms of Grammarly or ChatGPT as examples.
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Filling in their sperm? The watch? How the does a watch hesitate and what is that even all supposed to mean?
As doctors of theoretical physics and experimental physics, the two originally had enough confidence in their own IQ. In order to allow human beings to have more high-IQ offspring, the two of them went to a sperm bank for high-IQ people to donate sperm, but they were filling in the sperm. The watch hesitated for a moment. - Deathfighter_81416dCommented*BRRRRRRRTTTTT!!!*
- Deathfighter_81416dCommented*WOOOSSHHH!!!* *WOOOOSHH!!!* *WOOSSSSHHHH!!!*
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I think you forgot about the Anti-ship warfare part.
➤| The UNS Light Bringer is an Arleigh Burke-Class Destroyer of the Flight III classification. It is an advanced guided-missile destroyer equipped with the latest Spy-6 radar along with the updated Aegis combat system. It is capable of Anti-Air Warfare(AAW), Anti-Submarine Warfare(ASW), and Anti-Surface Warfare(ASuW). |