Comrade_Mandeep

wanna do a collab chapter sometime ?

I don't have anything to say because all I want to know is how the hell you are not famous? This is a seriously underrated novel and it's better than 90% of garbage on this site. I can see you making it to the top chart if you keep writing. I can clearly see the work you must have put into this novel. Amazing job. I would clap for you if this was real life and not a review. I will find you if you stop working on this amazing novel. I am sure this will motivate you to keep going. if it don't *reloads shotgun* jk. But keep it up. Victory is yours.

So I read up to chapter 7 and I liked the sister character a lot. Really good concept. I noticed only 2 mistakes in the chapters so it's almost perfect. The story is interesting and if I read something more than 2 chapters you know it's good. I wouldn't nitpick and I liked the story and character. Keep up the good work. I also have a question for you so If you read this can I ask you a question?

you wrote some i think it was meant to be someone.

Hey, you made a little mistake I think. it should be sensor and not censors.