Vandumbo
A knight from the kingdom of France who had left Webnovel in search of better stories. And came back. Cuz' I'm dumb.
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Vandumbo1yrReplied to Cursed_sinIt's a joke about the time he has, as he has the time stop of The World
The man, seeing Lee going to end his career, joined his hands together and went on his knees. "Please young man, it's my third time failing the test. You are too young already. Let me pass this time. You have all of the time in the world."- Vandumbo1yrReplied to 0_Jordinio_0
Jordi', I ask because I would like to see it and I see you well doing it (sorry if I sound like the thousands of ungrateful readers already present on wbnvl), but will you make a fic' on Overlord?
'Guess I gotta look into finding the Stone of Gelel.' he mused. - Vandumbo1yrReplied to Vandumbo
Good new, Chaotic good is back
To just let him work in silence, and just simply leave him be. - Vandumbo1yrReplied to Vince_Gregorie
TYPE MOON, or Fate if you prefer, more precisely Fate Grand Order, if you want to find the wiki page of the character, just type Beast III L, and you've got it
This paragraph has been deleted. - Vandumbo1yrCommented(Check comment for mc pic)detailA Superhero Harem? Their love makes me stronger (MHA, OPM, Naruto, OP)Anime & Comics · ThighsSeeker
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Okay, I'm almost sur this is Chinese
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(that's why people re-write) I wanted to say
Thought on this chapter? - Vandumbo1yrCommented
"I sent some humans to the plane and all of them died, hahaha." this sentence... I guess the goal is to show what kind of moral the MC has, but... it's a bit (a lot) clumsy. . . The "hahaha" at the end is making it worse, from another POV, MC would just look like 'evil scientist A' doing evil experiments because he is evil. If I had to give you a tip, I would recommand you to read "Annihilation Maker" the DxD fic, just look at how Leo is introduced (you don't need to read until the point were his backstory is explained, it's kind of long), he is evil aligned (and goddawn worthy of it), he consider himself a magus (from Fate, and in this serie the majority of them are the worst of human scum, who would subject even their descendance to the most cruel experimentations to achieve ultimate goal of reaching the root), and yet a loveable character.
Ok, we got sidetracked, this woman is scary in a cute way, and she doesn't mind experimenting on humans. I don't have any problems with that since I have done it, I sent some humans to the plane and all of them died, hahaha. - Vandumbo1yrCommented
You put a picture of Vitch as the cover, so I dare hope to see her.
First of all this story will be harem but it will have a max of 4 women, and I have already chosen them and for people who wanted sona, rias, akeno, serafall, sry they will not be part of the harem. - Vandumbo2yrCommented
Have you seen the new Beast from FGO/Arcade? The new Nero?
"Oh yeah! there's also another order from the House of Claudius" Azazel said as he released a sigh. - Vandumbo2yrCommented
Any of Jordi's MC would do very, very, very bad in The Rising of the Shield Hero
"You're quite the woman," he pointed out, "Very attractive and a lovely personality. So just that, I want to get to know you better, maybe later something more." he couldn't quite stop himself from giving her body a once over with his eyes. - Vandumbo2yrCommented
There is two type of dragons. The lame one and the fortress/mountain-sized one that look better than your bike.
"It doesn't matter, I already have an idea in mind," Yarden shook his head, getting a raised blue eyebrow from Aqua in response, "Have you got anything that will let me become a dragon?" - Vandumbo2yrCommented
I fear the answer
The brown haired man gave a spluttering choking sound and fell back grasping at his chest, "What kind of super normie bullshit is that?!" he shouted, pointing at Yarden and staring at him with dead green eyes, "Are you just some super Gary Stu character that's shown up to make me look bad and steal all the girls?" - Vandumbo2yrCommented
The backstories XD
Aqua stuck her tongue out at him, "You dropped out of school after a rejection and barely ever left the house for years, and the second you did you got overcome with shock by a tractor of all things and had a heart attack out of shock!" she shot back, before gesturing out towards Yarden, "Unlike you, this kid actually is someone we can expect a good performance from. He's only fifteen, but he's a trained martial artist and almost pro sportsman. On top of that, he trains his body multiple times a week, has a job and died while fighting six other people trying to rob him!" - Vandumbo2yrCommented
Another kind of trap, and probably worse than the one we're used to.
While atop the throne, sat perhaps the most beautiful girl he'd ever seen. With a face that could make a model envious, oddly alluring cyan blue hair and a very curvy body that filled out her clothes insanely. - Vandumbo2yrCommented
Remind me of this DxD fanfic whom I forgot the name of, and its main character, Leo, who is the type of character which is able to speak logical BS like he breath.
'Nooo…No, no no! This…this is stupid!' Vritra groaned, 'Yet…why…why does it all line up so perfectly? Why does it all make such sick, twisted, stupid sense!? Why can I see that convoluted plan loving Yahweh actually coming up with something as nonsensical as all this!' - Vandumbo2yrCommented
Uh... My opinion about that is : PLOT. Nothing. Absolutely nothing more than that.
But, to him, it made sense. Sacred Gears responded to the desires of the user, that was for sure. But, affecting another Sacred Gear from who knows where around the world, in the possession of Azazel, while he was within his own mind? - Vandumbo2yrCommentedDo you want reality and immersion or do you want to min/max your own life, relying only on numbers for every decision?}
- Vandumbo2yrCommentedCh 22 Growing Scottish 4