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That and there is the potential to develop something like an alchemy golem by combining the paths. Metal path just has great synergy with a lot of other paths like bone path and any of the weapon/blade paths as well.
Metal and Lightning path, synergy goes hard
I can only think of Dupli-Kate from Invincible when I hear this.
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I always love the conversion rates in these fanfics because they show just how poor the Weasleys must of been to only have a bank account with less than 2 galleons.
This gives me this vibe
Author while the grammar in the other chapters is significantly better, this one is better l, but it still misses a lot. At first it's just capitulation errors which can be ignored, but as the story continues it gets slightly worse quality. It's not the biggest issue, but I feel a lot of people may drop it here based on the grammar, so it's just advice.
Webnovel seems to if removed the ability to edit reviews, it I would give this a solid 4/5 with the changes, however I don't know what happened, but the 3rd chapters grammar is still not fixed. It is better but past the halfway point it becomes very rough and you can only understand the general gist. Overall a much better read with only a few issues.
The grammar holds the story back a lot even thought the plot is still not very developed at this point. If the grammar were better I feel this novel has high potential, as with all RI fanfics it is an amazing world with lots of potential for authors to explore. Hope this stroy develops on the right path, will edit my review if the grammar undergoes a change for the better.
Is this meant to be criteria?
Hey author, do you know the name of the fan made ending for RI? I meant to read a while back, but I don't remember the name, thanks!
Clearly his older sister murdered him for the money.
10/10 spelling
Do the Shang clan and the other super clans from Fang Yuan's era exist yet, or are there other super clans?