Re release this man it's written horribly

O yea sorry

Why did Takuma steal obito name

Get takuma a summon faster

Very good

It's better this way

Post faster😭

Why is this story so good but nothing is happening,like I waited a whole week just to read that she can't get out of bed

In the end he gave up fighting the will of the world that's pretty pathetic,I know he technically beat it by going to a new universe but it's not the same,not that good of a ending tbh

Bro where did you come from this so good

This is officially one of the best novels,not just fanfics

I came back 3 years later and nothing 😭

The mc will get violated by fy

I want this story to focus on other villages too,maybe we could have cool villains from there and not have every powerhouse in Konoha because the other are too weak

Bro what,it was so cool but you ruined it by letting Danzo live

What why was he nice to her all out of the sudden,I get that he knows that she doesn't hate him but he should not be nice ,also I hope that when he revives he won't waste time with those maids again showing that he is so pure hearted is just boring imo

I expected that there will be the deerclops it's so cool,maybe he can go under ground and find ice chests

Really really good man, keep up the good work

Yeah sorry I forgot

If you use 10 smoke clones and train you train 10 times faster , meaning instead of training 10 months you get the same results in one month and it's too overpowered so I suggest he simply remove this aspect of the technique