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DeathIsntParadise

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  • DeathIsntParadise
    DeathIsntParadise1yr
    Replied to Tsubasa1

    His nickname is "Blood Demon"

    Ch 5 Code Name
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    Multiverse Systems: Demonic Resurrection in the Primordial Tower
    Book&Literature · droopyauthor
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    DeathIsntParadise1yr
    Replied to DeathIsntParadise

    Okay, Jesus christ I'm looking at other reviews, I'm o ly at chapter 7 I didn't know it got that bad.

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    A Gamers Guide to Necromancy
    Anime & Comics · Man0fsky
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  • DeathIsntParadise
    DeathIsntParadise1yr
    Posted

    The writing quality doesn't have any unique points, but there are no errors and the game interface is well thought out. The update stability is irrelevant at this point as it is finished at 70 chapters--though each chapter is equvilant to 3-4 chapters worth of reading. Story development is pretty well though out, it isn't some sort of masterpiece, but there is a good amount of thought given to the story. Character design is probably the worst one. There are numerous moments that don't make sense and serve too only satisfy the MC's disgusting power fantasy. Then again this is also a DXD fanfic so I assume you know the depth of depravity in which you are diving. The world background is pretty good, especially amoung DXD fanfics it's definitely one of, if not the best world background among DXD fanfics. It isn't a masterpiece by any stretch of the word, but, it is well thought out and serves to enhance the story. Overall, it is a praise-worthy fanfic, that, although has disgusting deep depths of depravity, also has good writing quality, world building and story development, it's characters leaves something to be desired, but it is also a finished fanfic (from what I can tell). Overall, it is a high-quality fanfic as far as DXD fanfics go.

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    A Gamers Guide to Necromancy
    Anime & Comics · Man0fsky
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  • DeathIsntParadise
    DeathIsntParadise1yr
    Posted

    It's a fun concept, but with poor execution. There isn't much to be said about the writing quality, it is on a average level, there isn't any stellar or unique qualities about it, but misspelled words are rare so I'm giving it 4 stars. I don't believe the update stability matters too much as there is around 80 chapters of content to go through, so I'll leave it at 3 stars. Story development is childish, but this is too be expected from a Gamer-esque novel. It doesn't explore any topics, and, shows inconsistencies from the world in which it takes place--Avatar--hence, why I am giving it 2 stars. Character design is bottom of the barrel stuff, I am used to childish characters and the like, but this one is particularly bad as it introduces annoying characters for no apparent reason and then they make the characters contradict themselves, so, this is 1 star. World background is nothing new, it's a fanfic and nothing is expanded upon, nor is anything developed.

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    Playing as a Bender (Avatar: Last Airbender SI)
    TV · blazuki
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  • DeathIsntParadise
    DeathIsntParadise1yr
    Posted

    I'm kind of impressed, thos was the first thing I have ever read that has made me not want to read it based on the first sentence. ................................................................

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    A technomancer’s journey in an apocalyptic world
    Sci-fi · SagelyDaoist
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  • DeathIsntParadise
    DeathIsntParadise1yr
    Posted

    What are you an old man? Why are there still sexist beliefs in novels in the age we live in. Anyway, nothing much to say, if you can't deal with sexist beliefs, avoid this novel. If you're fine with it or believe that woman are inferior, go right ahead.

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  • DeathIsntParadise
    DeathIsntParadise1yr
    Commented

    You just said she was from a normal family, but now she is from a Wizarding family?

    Ch 28 Chapter 28 "Trevor is Lost"
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    Marvel's Hogwarts Wizard
    Anime & Comics · Poka_Poka
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  • DeathIsntParadise
    DeathIsntParadise1yr
    Commented

    If you're curious about his powers/power level, you can check out the vs battle wiki which estimates his power 'tier' to be 7-C (7-C is a power tier in which one has the power to destroy a town.).

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Goddamn ROB
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    BNHA/MHA: The Dark Hero
    Anime & Comics · maerdyyyy
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  • DeathIsntParadise
    DeathIsntParadise1yr
    Commented

    Still can't get over the thought his hero name is "Bruce Lee".

    Ch 70 Chapter 70
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    In MHA with Star Platinum
    Anime & Comics · blazuki
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  • DeathIsntParadise
    DeathIsntParadise1yr
    Posted

    Such a amazing main character so badass and alpha enslaving people and telling them he owns them. Okay writing quality nothing special on the site. I'm automatically assigning update stability a 5 star because I haven't bothered to finish it. Story development is the most ordinary and stereotypical one can think of. Character design as I mentioned earlier is incredible such depth too characters really shocked a full 1 star. World background doesn't seem to be very present but it is an interesting spin making demons the more civilized ones.

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    Modern Weapon Summoning System
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  • DeathIsntParadise
    DeathIsntParadise1yr
    Posted

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    Saharan Successor
    Book&Literature · Vostarian
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  • DeathIsntParadise
    DeathIsntParadise1yr
    Replied to DeathIsntParadise

    Oop sorry I didn't mean chapter 70 I meant 94 I have no idea where I got 70 from.

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    A Wizard's Secret
    Fantasy · Shadow on the Moon
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  • DeathIsntParadise
    DeathIsntParadise1yr
    Posted

    Writing qualify doesn't need to be mentioned much it is standard webnovel quality not on the level of professional writer but a hobbiest. Updating stability doesn't need to be mentioned it's finished. Story development it pretty awful the mc just happens to chance upon certain encounters and when you the mc finds someone you can immediately guess what they will get from them I can see the authors thought process which is usually a good thing but is bad in this case as I can see the author going "Hey, this is a good idea let's do that than proceeding to scrap it and leave it in the story. Character design is even worse with the mc carrying the classic webnovel sexist viewpoint of if there is a pretty woman she must join my harem or die I only got to chapter 70 where the mc extorts a woman to be his partner then proceeds to molest her. Worldbackground doesn't have a lot of thought put into it as although it has a good framework the author doesn't have the patience to fill it out or stick to it thus making the frame useless. Overall review - I would heavily discourage reading this the only affect you will get from reading this is not enjoyment (Unless you're into the blackmail **** genre) but rather a waste of time and emotions. Usually in novels like this the world seems to work in a way that his nonconseual actions are right and just but this could just be me being ignorant but I don't have that vibe at all it feels like the mc is proud to be a sexist, advocate of nonconsensual stuff. Thank you for reading I hope you can take this review and reflect on whether or not you want to read it. Side note: I kinda got tricked since although there were kinda gradual signs in the first 40 chapters it wasn't so overtly obvious as it was after the 40 chapters so if you do want to read this please read chapter 70 and if you like it feel free to enjoy!

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    A Wizard's Secret
    Fantasy · Shadow on the Moon
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  • DeathIsntParadise
    DeathIsntParadise1yr
    Commented

    The idea of God shouldn't be limited to gender right? After all whether male or female life can't be created out of anything but their union. Unless you are to artificially replicate the sperm cells. Though our capability to so such a thing in my opinion basically solidifies the fact that there is no God or at least one of consciousness.

    Ch 1 Happy Retirement
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    Reincarnated at Level Two Million
    Action · Alphachoas
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  • DeathIsntParadise
    DeathIsntParadise1yr
    Posted

    Sexist not much to say your classic webnovel with no blaring unique or innovative characteristics. Writing quality is nothing special. Updates seems okay relatively speaking. Story development seems to have hit rock bottom. Character design and God forbid world background also seem to have reached this state 2/5

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    Save That Dungeon!
    Fantasy · Magic_
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    DeathIsntParadise1yr
    Posted

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    Starting From Fooling the Elderly into Registering for a Cultivation Training Class
    Eastern · Evolution of Ten Updating Beasts
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    DeathIsntParadise2yr
    Commented

    Could of tried to change it a bit

    "However, when I was about to reach this village, a mishap happened, and a pack of monsters suddenly attacked my carriage." He said. "Luckily I survive by abandoning all of my belongings."
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    Life In Another World
    Fantasy · Black_Rabbit_Oz
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  • DeathIsntParadise
    DeathIsntParadise3yr
    Commented

    Just half-god

    "I'm no God...but I'll take a look. It would take some time though."
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    Reborn as Batman's Little Brother
    Anime & Comics · Imbreak
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  • DeathIsntParadise
    DeathIsntParadise3yr
    Commented

    Good luck with you're exams

    These days are quite hard and busy, I have to revise a lot for the baccalaureate, I take the code, I have a lot of exams.
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    GodKing of Life
    Anime & Comics · Fir3Cooz
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  • DeathIsntParadise
    DeathIsntParadise3yr
    Commented

    Continue you please if you need a break don't be afraid to take it

    In spite of that, I want to finish it for my own satisfaction so I ask you, should I continue or stop?
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