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are you publishing anywhere else?
why was this dropped? other than a few grammatical issues the story is quiet good
this was so good why was it abandoned?
guess this was abandoned
Impressively well written and a fun read so far I am excited for more
My only real complaint about this is the lack of updates the MC is a bit cliche but overall it does not ruin the story and adds a bit of humor
NEED MORE!!!!!! đ±
getting better with each page the action the mystery this is a good read
needs updated a lot more often but this is a good read ive not been so entertained in ages so give this a shot i promise it is worth while to read
ok yeah other than a few typos this is gold its different than other ones so far want more of this soon as possible its going into my top 10
ok so dar so good interesting story plot good action... im looking forward to more of this one
yup deff need more of this
ok seriously where is the next bit of this I am hooked it is so we'll written and I am legit craving more tons of stuff written about systems and leveling up but this is one of a kind and a gem
this is really getting interesting can't wait to see where it leads
so far so good
good though right lol
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
good chapter well written
they all seem to be super short and then we have to pay money to unlock them all
why do we have to unlock every new chapter... this site is starting to seem like a scam to me just to suck money out of people