Honestly this is what I THINK its like. Please prove me wrong, good or bad, so that i can improve. I probably SUCK so it would be appreciated. I promise to try my best to see every comment highlighting constructive criticism so that I can be a BETTER AUTHOR. If you comment literally just plain rude stuff, idrc so your comments will NOT be taken to heart.

I love the effort, I want to see where it goes. I'd definitely want to see you blow up one day. I know how it is to make stories that almost no one looks at so consider me your #1 fan for right now. Just to return the support, check out mine if you want :)