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this story is downright one of the best on here! the only thing i would say is to down grade on the immense amount of info with their stats and possible find a way to make it easier but other than that I love the plot, the characters, the attention to detail, KEEP THIS GOING! PLEASE!!
I completely agree with you about the fact that bam should have never chased Rachel in the first place but this is a different matter all together. monk and Gary never made the choice for themselves. monk was quite possibly tortured and broken mentally before being turned and Gary only turned because the demon has control of him. Rachel herself was a demon and should never have been allowed to live as long as she has
hey author! instead of "Less strong" you can put "weaker" itll make more sense and let the sentence flow better